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Three Mile Drove, Chapter Twenty One (standard:horror, 1258 words) [22/29] show all parts | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Added: Oct 27 2007 | Views/Reads: 2797/1961 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Things are hotting up for Darren Goldwater as events in Three Mile Drove reach their climax | |||
CHAPTER TWENTY ONE Darren gave chase along the tree-lined track, and as he tried to clear his throat from the smoke that was clogging it up, he saw a grey-cloaked figure running ahead of the child. He broke unwillingly into a sprint, ignoring the rasping he felt as he raced through boggy ground. He saw the figure ahead of the girl more clearly now, it was hunched and trailing a leg, though it seemed to find the conditions no more of an impediment to its retreat than did the child, treading quickly through the terrain, the polluted air not hampering it. But despite his smoke smeared eyesight Darren knew the child ahead couldn't be the missing girl, she was too tall for a minor, he guessed she was nearing her teens, in fact she ran with the fluency of a teenager. The wind blew like a hungry draught freed from a vacuum, while overhead, giant conifers bent double as though humming a warning down at him. Flames leapt into the sky, showing themselves above the trees like torchlight guiding the way, and over to his left where the ruins of the house lay, snapping timber erupted into flames creating solar-like flares, illuminating the ground in brilliant, transient light. It was amidst one such flare that the figures suddenly halted, reaching a point where the track diverged northeast and southwest. Seeming uncertain on which path to take he saw the deformed figure stop, then grab the girl as she ran into it. Darren stopped and gaped, a cold sweat running down his forehead. He saw skin riddled with holes, like craters on a lunar surface. He thought he saw it, though his mind was willing him not to believe it – and there seemed to be tiny pieces writhing in those holes, like worms maybe. Its brown texture blistered, its cracks deep and raw like a partly peeled potato. The bulbous head seemed grotesquely large, out of proportion to the frailty of the body. The eyes were sunken so deeply into their sockets he couldn't be sure whether they were eyes at all. Its nose seemed little more than a gnarled twig while the mouth was simply a slit, which crossed from cheek to cheek. Then, just as you might snuff out a match, the light thrown by the flare had gone; even the main blaze seemed to be subsiding, leaving a murky orange twilight. He realised then, that rain had begun to fall heavily; it was as though ghost firemen from the heavens had arrived to extinguish the blaze. And with it, the creature (for that was all he could call it) had gone, lost in the smoke that drifted across the area like unrelenting fog. Perhaps his mind had begun playing tricks, he'd only had that split second or two to form his visual impression. Perhaps the creepiness of the area, the sudden contrast between the light from the blaze and rapidly approaching dusk had stolen onto his mind like an intruder in a dream, distorting and fragmenting reality into a kaleidoscope of the unreal. Except that it hadn't. Because what he thought he saw had been reality. Above all else the stench, which had made him want to wretch, told him so. More animal than human, but not even the most wretched beast could be so ugly. It was as if he'd left the real world unknowingly and been shown the footpath to hell in those few seconds. Every instinct told him that he should run from this place, this godforsaken area, retreat before he became engulfed in whatever evil existed here. But the adrenaline that surged through him now determined otherwise. He dithered for only a second and then chose the southwest track. * * McPherson stubbed his cigarette end in a tray and rapped his fingers on the desk, running the patrol officer's message through his mind for the umpteenth time. It could be an out of control bonfire of course, one of the Tomblin tribe burning off the crap they'd let build up over the weeks, maybe months. Or might it be something else? He just wished the officer who'd spotted Click here to read the rest of this story (57 more lines)
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