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Three Mile Drove Chapter Twenty (standard:horror, 1688 words) [21/29] show all parts | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Added: Sep 23 2007 | Views/Reads: 2804/1947 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A pop musician has inherited a smallholding in the English fens, and right now things are getting a little too hot for him to handle! | |||
She was glad she was telling him, glad to be free of the burden that held her down like an ankle stone to the water's bottom. That threatened to overwhelm her consciousness, merging it with the abnormality which torments the sleeping mind. Even though she shouldn't have done what she did, she was glad. But confession to her crime was merely one stepping stone out of the murky waters that surrounded her. She'd been holding on to secrets for too long, but now, was the plain fact they threatened to engulf her very soul the reason for her divulgence? Was the fear of losing her sanity the one reason she was revealing what lay out on the fens, was it all just selfish concern for her own health, and had panic been the driving force behind what she was doing? Or was it selfishness in another form, that of being unable to live with her own conscience, just like the villain in an old time movie, the kind who turned the blade upon himself because he could no longer live with his actions? Would she be driven into this very act herself if she didn't tell all? Would she do it anyway if insanity took over? But then, had there been another factor existing beside the evil, just like the good knight alongside the bad? The one who might yet fling off his chain mail and dive into the waters to save her, to rescue her from the heavy waters that threatened right now to crush her mind. She'd agonised all afternoon, the much needed rest hadn't come, so heavy was the burden upon her, but her mind was made up. She would tell all. Was she doing it for him, because of him, out of fear for him, or fear for herself? Right now she didn't know, her thoughts just whirled around inside her head faster and faster, just like the whirlpool that circled above her. She needed to see McPherson, to tell him all, that was the only thing she could do right now, she couldn't see beyond the next five minutes. * * His car wasn't in his parking space. It should have served as an omen, but she didn't even look for it. Her eyes were hazy as she made her way to the enquiry office, ringing robotically on the bell. She was dimly aware of the enquiry officer placing a phone call, then more dimly aware of the woman returning, her face solemn, a mask of death. ‘I'm sorry madam, Sergeant McPherson left the office a short time ago, can I take a message?' Claire Summerby didn't know whether she'd made a reply. Chapter Twenty Even as Darren entered Three Mile Drove he sensed there was something wrong, the smell of smoke wafted by the strong wind invaded his nostrils, clogging his throat and making it feel covered in tiny cinders. The grey sky was lightened by an orange glow to the west, and a plume of smoke billowed towards the heavens as though an unearthly tornado was about to unwind. He closed his window to escape the ashes that showered around him like shrivelled leaves, and then passing old man Tomblin's place he saw the pensioner standing alongside his fence, he might have been a granite statue had his hands not been pressed to the railings as if he were absorbed by the spectacle. He seemed impervious to the hot ashes which swirled through the skies, and as Darren passed he turned in his direction, his wizened features creasing either into an ugly smile or grimace, he couldn't decide which. The air grew misty, its atmosphere contaminated by the thickening smoke, and then through it he saw its source. Claire's former childhood home was now just a mixture of smoke and flame, amidst which debris was being flung high into the air, roasted by the heat and circulated by Click here to read the rest of this story (100 more lines)
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