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The Street (standard:mystery, 1155 words) | |||
Author: Xin | Added: Nov 04 2000 | Views/Reads: 3932/2902 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Time passes by..the one and only, faithful Time, and where are we going? In a long, grey death row, following each other. | |||
The Street Part I of the Grey Trilogy All rights reserved. No part of this story may be copied, printed or used in any other such way without permission of the author. (c) 1999 It wasn't raining. The fog slowly surrounding the city wasn't allowing it just yet. It was one of those days when everything's a shade in between, and every object casts half a shadow, ambiguous as this day itself. I was walking along the street, one of the many grey arteries of the City. I seemed to be the only person there at that time of the day, if you didn't count the cars that went past me, speedy silver capsules...somehow it didn't seem right that you'd count the person behind the wheel as being a real Person. The grey cars on the street were its life flow, and although they were going past me ever so fast, they all seemed to be going in slow motion, too slow and too quiet for the City. The drivers were in a hurry. All in a hurry to get somewhere, to their base camp, only to start the cycle again the next day, and then the next, and then the next...spending their life in a never-ending cycle. It was all the same all day every day, unchanged by the circumstances or by the place. The setting might have been different, but the silent play involving the people was always the same. The buildings around me were massive and grey, tall and covered in mirrored glass, that reflected the grey sky, and the clouds that flew by, like shadows of things past. The City was undeniably growing. A year, or was it a month, a day ago? the buildings around me weren't there, or maybe they were, but not as tall, not as imposing, not really There. The street was empty. There were no People there, only Shadows. Shadows of people. Shadows of accountants, shadows of workers, shadows of computer programmers, dressed in business suits that all look the same...a neat little white shirt, tucked in the neat little grey skirt or pants, under a smart grey jacket, with charcoal variations. All the same. The little details - the tucks and buttons - only drowned them in the already-present conformity. And all the Shadows of People looked the same, under their smart hairstyles and smart glasses and smart suitcases. The shadows were all coming from the same place, the tall mirrored sky-scrapers that gave shape and volume to the city, and which were the home of neat little offices, containing white desks at which the Shadows sat and did Heaven knows what mundane piece of work that eventually, put together with all the other mundane pieces of work, was going to form the bigger picture, a puzzle that Society could look at and maybe even use some day, if it would become needed, if the grey canvas that the world was made of would somehow be ripped apart. And they were all going the same way, like a flock of grey sheep that follow the leader, without a mind or will of their own. All going to their little houses in the suburbia, where their spouses, or rather, Shadows of Spouses would wait for them, and ask them how their day was, and listening for and hearing the reply before it was spoken and out of the other Shadow's mouth, a thing taken for granted, for it was the same every day. And seeing their children come home from school. The children were disobedient spots of colour, and for that they were promptly sent to their rooms, where the colour could be worked and improved on, until it decided to borrow a more neutral and less offending shape, and join the other Shadows for dinner in front of the TV box that showed other Shadows going about their grey daily lives. Flock of sheep. But who was the Leader? An unseen force seemed to be driving these people around like puppets, a force greater than anything, a force that wanted everything, and when you didn't have anything to feed it anymore, it wanted you and your insides. It got inside of you, and sucked you empty. Empty of feelings, empty of emotions. Empty of thoughts. It just left you with a pre-programmed instruction, like a fake helix inside a dying cell. A coma, with one Click here to read the rest of this story (43 more lines)
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