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The Street (standard:mystery, 1155 words) | |||
Author: Xin | Added: Nov 04 2000 | Views/Reads: 3933/2902 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Time passes by..the one and only, faithful Time, and where are we going? In a long, grey death row, following each other. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story little tube attached to your heart, and that little tube the only thing that keeps you going, and if some merciful hand pulled that tube out, out you were. Gone. Wake up. Eat. Get dressed. Go to work. Work. Go back home. Watch whatever's on TV. Sleep. Wake up. Eat. Get dressed. Go to work, work, work.... I stopped in the middle of the street, among the cars that were going past me at the speed of light. They didn't see me, or maybe they did, but it was so far out of the driver's routine to stop, that they hadn't bothered. It started to rain. The droplets were tiny, cold and wet...trying to cover the City, maybe trying to give it a bit of colour, to make the tiniest difference to the sea of grey...but the only good that the cold rain could do was changing the shade of grey, to a much darker, more solid grey. Now at least I could tell the City was really there, not just a figment of my imagination. Time went on. The Shadows were walking towards the mouths of the subway, waiting to swallow the flock, only to regurgitate them again and again, at the other end. The shadows were talking to each other, or maybe to themselves, without words, the words silent and empty of meaning and sense and tone...The shadows laughed, their lips stretching on their faces, senseless, twisted and fake. I stopped, and for a second, time seemed to stop with me, a faithful and loyal companion. The shadows stopped in mid-stride; the grey flock came to a halt. Nothing changed. The expression on the Shadows faces was the same, a kind of patient expectancy, like an animal that knows its going to be fed shortly. They were statues, with the expression permanently embedded on their cold stone faces. The buildings were getting closer and closer...seemed to want to cover us, collapse on the army of Shadows, make them a permanent part of the background. It started to pour. Or maybe it was just me. I sat down on a grey stone fountain, in the middle of the grey concrete street, and wept. I wept for all and every one of the stone Shadows that were stuck in time with me, wept for every one of the grey buildings trying to reach the sky, and for the clouds that were trying to cover the City, a tiny part of the dying grey World. any comments appreciated, write to xin@twistie.8m.com Tweet
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