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Jimmy Part 3 (standard:mystery, 768 words) [3/3] show all parts | |||
Author: lowelldam | Added: Jan 14 2005 | Views/Reads: 2689/0 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The story of a serial killer with a twist | |||
Jimmy had just finished putting the jar away when he heard a noise from behind. He froze. He was afraid to turn around, was afraid of getting caught at what he was just doing. The noise got closer. Someone was walking up the ravine towards him. His fear could only hold him for a short while, he had to see what was behind him. He slowly turned around. Callie Wellston had just had her eighth birthday. She decided she was old enough to walk to the park by herself. After playing for a little while her curiosity got ahold of her. She felt old enough and brave enough to walk through the creekbed up into the ravine. She started walking the bed stopping occasionally to look under a rock or small log on the bank. she was hoping to find a salamander. She had seen them here when she was here with her parents and wanted to catch one to take home with her as a souviner. As she got closer to the deeper part of the ravine closest to the railroad tracks she saw a boy. He was a large boy but she was not afraid today. She walked deeper back into the ravine. The boy was drinking something from a strange water bottle. He finished it and put the bottle in his backpack. Callie decided she wanted a playmate today and headed for the boy. Jimmy saw a small girl walking towards him along the bank of the creek. His fear evaporated quickly. "Its just a girl." he thought. "What could she possibly do." He turned away from the girl and headed for the tracks. Callie saw the boy and recognized him as soon as he turned around and showed his face. He was the large boy that all the others including her brother teased. "Hey wait for me." she said he turned and headed for the tracks. The boy ignored her and kept on going. " Hey don't go. I just want to play." Jimmy kept on walking, his pace quickening as the girl spoke. He didn't feel like playing anymore today. He had finished what he came here for and wanted to get home. He didn't need a little girl tagging along with him. Callie was getting frustrated with the boy as he kept ignoring her. "Wait for me Jumbo Jimmy." she called out to him. She had heard the other kids call him this name for years and he never seemed to care. Jimmy heard the name and stopped dead in his tracks. Now even little girls were calling him this. It was too much. He turned on the girl, anger clearly showing on his face and in his eyes. "Don't call me that." he shouted at the girl. Callie was glad to see the boy stop, but when she saw his face as he turned around she became scared. There was something in his eyes that she didn't like. She bent down and picked up a couple of large rocks that were lying near her feet. She felt like she needed to get away from him as soon as she could. She turned and started to run. Jimmy picked up a couple of rocks himself and gave chase. "Wait for me you little bitch!" he shouted as he chased her. He threw one of his rocks striking the girl in the back. She fell from the impact. Jimmy closed the distance between them. Callie lay in the creek with tears running down her face from the pain the rock had caused and from the fear that was gripping ahold of her.She turned while she got up and saw that Jimmy was almost on top of her. she threw one of the rocks as hard as she could. It caught Jimmy by suprise as it struck him on his temple driving him to his knees. Jimmy fell to his knees as an explosion of pain hit his forehead. His hand went up to his head instictively. When he brought it down he saw the blood that the rock had brought forth. His mind began to race. He was bleeding again and the little girl was the cause of it. He wanted her to pay for this travesty. He picked up the biggest rock he could and got up running towards the girl. His eyes were wide with anger as he brought the rock down on the girls head. She slumped down into the creek with blood dripping from the large cut the rock had caused. Jimmy fell with a flump into the creek. Tweet
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