Buying a Coke (standard:non fiction, 147 words)
Author: PeterFromOZ	Added: Apr 04 2011	Views/Reads: 2762/2	Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Buying a Coke - a small piece of creative writing.

Buying a Coke 

I put in the obligatory $1.20 and pressed the button for a cola. That's
life, isn't it? Down the chute thunked a can. I pulled it out of the 
machine. It was cold and wet, like a lover's kiss. In fact, it nearly 
froze my fingertips as I held it. I pulled back the ring and there was 
a satisfying ku-chish sound as the gases were release from the can. I 
put it to my lips and poured a long sip into my mouth. The drink was 
cold and acid-fizzy and sickly sweet. And I could instantly taste the 
caffeine and large amounts of sugar. 

The acids in this cola beverage were almost burning my mouth and neck.
Why do I drink this shit? It's probably an addiction. 

Q) 	Are kisses really cold and wet? What other analogies can you think
of for it? 


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