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Ashes (standard:poetry, 119 words) | |||
Author: Julia | Added: Dec 31 2008 | Views/Reads: 2823/0 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
it starts with ashes, and it ends with ashes. | |||
The ashes spread from the fire as you open the fireplace door They lift up like an explosion and twist into the air Landing softly onto your black and white dress You open your dark eyes; they are illuminated by your pale skin A flicker reflects in your black eyes It dances in a bright orange glow- so blinding, startling in this black and white world The fire dances, whispering its joyful song You close your eyes again feeling the heat warm your icy skin At last you'll be freed from your frozen world The fire spits out from the fireplace sparking around you It licks at your white skin, blackening it until all that is left is ashes Tweet
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