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Irresistible Intricacies (standard:poetry, 141 words)
Author: LoriAdded: Nov 20 2007Views/Reads: 2997/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Love can be irresistible and so complex. This is our, Chris Craine and my, take on love. We wrote it together. Thanks Chris it was so fun to do.
 



Irresistible Intricacies 

~ 

Once I had a love. 

So beautiful and pure. 

It reminded me of a dove. 

As irresistible as it was, 

I was given probable cause, 

to believe they were too complex. 

~ 

Like a puzzle, without the pieces, 

I put the picture all in place, 

shaping all the answers 

to try and see the face. 

~ 

What will it take 

for you to come back to me? 

What price will I pay? 

I would, gladly, do anything 

to make you mine again. 

~ 

Is it secrets that you wish? 

I will whisper in your ear, 

Gentle Caresses. 

I will draw you near! 

~ 

Let my heart speak to you. 

Can you hear it? 

Am I getting through? 

With all the 

irresistible intricacies 

please know my love is true. 

© November 17, 2007 by Chris Craine and Lori Laird 


   


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