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Comrades (standard:horror, 1704 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: Sep 13 2007 | Views/Reads: 3463/2198 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
How will his old friend be after so many years apart? Some severed friendships are best not rekindled. | |||
The bus came to a halt and Bob Clement stepped off, nodded an acknowledgment to the driver who drove away, leaving him in a light breeze under the bright sun and cloudless sky. He was in unfamiliar territory, so he had no idea where to go first, and thought he would find a local pub or caf¨¦, as the locals there might know where to find who he was looking for. After around ten minutes, he was sat outside a caf¨¦, drinking tea, in the village of Mosshey, eight miles north of Arbroath, Scotland, near the North sea coast. He took from his inside pocket, a letter that had brought him here. He¡¯d already read it many times, and had virtually memorised every word. He read it again, not really knowing why, perhaps to confirm he was in the right place, or a simple desire to read his old friend¡¯s words again. Dear Bob, I was saddened to hear I was being posted to another division up in Arnhem to help repel the German advance, effectively meaning I would never see you again. I never struck up a similar friendship as I did with you in Normandy, and as you know, the war ended four months later, when we all went our separate ways. I would like to know what happened to you. It would be good to see you again, catch up on old times. I came up to a village in Scotland. Mosshay, overlooking the North sea. I do hope to find a wife and start a family. It¡¯s nice and quiet here, a far cry from the frontline. So if you¡¯re ever up this way, please call in, we could have a drink, which of course, I will pay for. Anyway. I hope your keeping well, and I look forward to seeing you again. My kindest regards. Thomas Roberts. 07/02/1946. When he had first received the letter, all those years ago, Bob having returned home to Plymouth, he had told himself he¡¯d make a special journey up there. However, circumstance meant that he had never found the time to make the trip. A marriage and a career meant that gradually he had not so much forgotten his old comrade, but accepted that he would probably never make the excursion. As the years went by, he harboured doubts about simply turning up and expecting to be greeted with open arms. He guessed he probably would be, but it did not alter the fact that he would be a virtual stranger to him. He certainly would be now, after 59 years. It was a pensioner¡¯s golf tournament that had brought him to this part of the country, near to where his old friend lived. He knew it was a good opportunity to visit Thomas again, and he certainly could not pass it up, being only eight miles from Mosshay. He had lost the golf game, so therefore travelled north to find his old comrade. He folded up the letter and put it back, wondering how on earth he was going to find Thomas without a proper address. He finished his drink and decided that the best thing to do was simply ask around. He asked in the caf¨¦, in a charity shop, even a boy riding past on a bike. ¡®Do you know a Thomas Roberts?¡¯ was met with shakes of the head and shrugs. ¡®Sorry, but you could try¡.¡¯. was a trail that he followed that eventually led him to a tavern, or pub, overlooking the sea. At the entrance to a footpath that led down to the rocky coast, Bob looked out towards the horizon, the breeze stronger, ruffling the sparse hair he had left. After three hours, he wondered if this place might be the last chance saloon. He turned and walked across to the entrance. Inside it was dark and gloomy, the bar itself obviously well lit. There were not many people in there. An elderly man by the window wearing a flat cap was reading a newspaper, a cigar jammed between his teeth, curling blue/grey smoke in the light from the window behind. Another man, early fifties, was in the darkest recess, doing nothing but drink from his pint. At the bar, another man, late forties, was chatting to a portly, bald barman, also late forties. He thought that if this turned up nothing, then he would probably have a drink, then give up and go back to Arbroath, to his golfing colleagues. ¡°Excuse me,¡± he said, to both of them. ¡°Do either of you happen to know a Thomas Roberts?¡± Both men smiled, but there was no humour there. The man sitting at the bar nodded. ¡°Ah, Tommy. Daft old fool. You shouldn¡¯t bother going to see him¡±. ¡°You know him?¡± said Bob, smiling. ¡°Yes, we know ¡®im,¡± said the barman. ¡°¡¯E lives just up the road ¡®ere¡±. He pointed in the general direction. ¡°¡¯bout a mile up the road. First ¡®ouse you see on the right. That¡¯s ¡®im. You shouldn¡¯t bother. E¡¯s a bit, you know¡±. He twirled his finger at the side of his head. ¡°What was that thing you called ¡®im recently,¡± he said to the other man. ¡°Erm, a paranoid Click here to read the rest of this story (66 more lines)
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