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The Greedy Man Poem (standard:poetry, 171 words) | |||
Author: i.luv.u | Added: May 02 2007 | Views/Reads: 4645/0 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
hey, this is a poem i wrote when i was like 8 or something thats why its not very good, but it will have to do until i finish my story. id luv some feedback anyway! | |||
There once was a man called Ned Needy Who was definately the most greedy Man on the earth He was like that from birth He never gave gold to the needy He had piles and piles of money Which he wasted on very sweet honey He was really quite fat And in actual fact He really did look very funny The poor would ask him for cash But he would just say "Flabberdash!" He would send them away Without any pay And continue to study his sash One day when he was awalking Ned was about to start talking To a man dressed in red With a rock as a head Then Ned Needy just stood there gawking The man with a rock for a head Whose name was actually Fred Got very annoyed Because he couldnt avoid That horrible man called Ned Ned got very offended And then old Ned Needy ended By losing his cool When pushed in a pool By the man with a rock for a head Tweet
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