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On the Front Line-a war story Pt. 2 (standard:other, 317 words) [2/3] show all parts | |||
Author: Cooper47 | Added: Feb 17 2007 | Views/Reads: 2610/0 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Cooper is enjoying his life at war. NOTE: this only has four people included in this story. | |||
On the Front Line-a war story Mission: The explosion By MR. Cooper47 Inside the border of Iraq. 2:00 P.M. "Red Hat; Can we go back to the camp? It is clear that all the men are dead", said Copper, it was the mission Red Hat was talking about last time. "Fine, lets go",Red Hat said. He, Copper, and Drake were the only ones whom came. Also they had tooken all the weppons (excuse the spelling). You see, they saw some Iraqies comeing around the camp and they took care of them wandering eyes. as they came to da camp: "Why don't we just sneek up right behind the camp and fire a couple rounds and scare the hell out of them. Woo! Won't that be a hoot", you can probaly tell that he is from Texas. "Hey!,Guys, do you see anyone around the camp". "No, oh crap run in!", Red Hat said fireing a few rounds in the air and snuck into the camp. Cooper and Drake right behind him. "Hellllllo? Are you guys okay?". He wandered into the camp. He saw someone in the middle of the incampment. He rushed to the now reconizeble Ragmouth. "Run", he said feebily. "What," Red Hat asked. "There is a bomb going to go off when you got here, they killed all of us, but not me. I hid, as they were leaving they shot all of... MOVE!". The four of them got running. 3 2, not far enough 1... BOOM!! You could see the soundwaves rushing to them and knocked Red Hat at least 40 feet away (and i am not kidding) all the dust flying around and the trama in the head gave Red Hat a good trouble trying to find the rest of them. "Helllp! Where are you guys", he shouted. All alone. TO be continued. deticated to: Norman Rockwell. Died in action. war isnt a game Tweet
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