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On the Front Line-a war story Pt. 2 (standard:other, 317 words) [2/3] show all parts
Author: Cooper47Added: Feb 17 2007Views/Reads: 2610/0Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Cooper is enjoying his life at war. NOTE: this only has four people included in this story.
 



On the Front Line-a war story 

Mission: The explosion 

By MR. Cooper47 

Inside the border of Iraq. 

2:00 P.M. 

"Red Hat; Can we go back to the camp? It is clear that all the men are
dead", said Copper, it was the mission Red Hat was talking about last 
time. 

"Fine, lets go",Red Hat said. He, Copper, and Drake were the only ones
whom came. Also they had tooken all the weppons (excuse the spelling). 

You see, they saw some Iraqies comeing around the camp and they took
care of them wandering eyes. 

as they came to da camp: 

"Why don't we just sneek up right behind the camp and fire a couple
rounds and scare the hell out of them. Woo! Won't that be a hoot", you 
can probaly tell that he is from Texas. "Hey!,Guys, do you see anyone 
around the camp". 

"No, oh crap run in!", Red Hat said fireing a few rounds in the air and
snuck into the camp. Cooper and Drake right behind him. "Hellllllo? Are 
you guys okay?". He wandered into the camp. He saw someone in the 
middle of the incampment. He rushed to the now reconizeble Ragmouth. 

"Run", he said feebily. 

"What," Red Hat asked. 

"There is a bomb going to go off when you got here, they killed all of
us, but not me. I hid, as they were leaving they shot all of... MOVE!". 


The four of them got running. 

3 

2, not far enough 

1... BOOM!! 

You could see the soundwaves rushing to them and knocked Red Hat at
least 40 feet away (and i am not kidding) all the dust flying around 
and the trama in the head gave Red Hat a good trouble trying to find 
the rest of them. 

"Helllp! Where are you guys", he shouted. All alone. 

TO be continued. 

deticated to: Norman Rockwell. Died in action. 

war isnt a game 


   



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