JigSaw Pt. 2 (standard:mystery, 462 words) [2/2] show all parts
Author: JigSaw	Added: Jan 18 2007	Views/Reads: 2729/3	Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
now Jeff is home with the manic mother in this second edit, and is where things start to pick up, Nothing really bad will happen untill the fourth or fifth Pt. but bear with me.

JIGSAW 

pt. 2 

*Erie begining music* 

"Now, Jeff, what is going on with you, your grades are slipping and you
are haveing trouble makeing friends ever since you went to the 
hospital, I am getting worried with your behaveior", Mrs. Macintosh 
said one day after school, and yes she is Scottish. 

"Nothing Mrs. STUPID!", and Poor Jeff ran out the door. You see that is
what his mother told him to do if any one was asking questions, he 
would call them stupid and get out, but he would still get punished for 
doing it in the first place. 

"I will punish him, oh yes he is in alot of trouble, oh I will! Yes I
will tell him that", need I say more, she was talking to Mrs. Macintosh 
of course, and man was x-Mrs. Simmons was Pissed off, and when she hung 
up she said the following," Mr. Jeff, now you call some one stupid, oh 
if you thought kicking you and crap like that then prepare for some 
real shit, you are going to be locked in the shed for one month, if you 
ever call the police on me then it is for a year! So cut this freaking 
crap out, NOW!", and beat him with a leather belt. 

Oh how he longed for freedom from this wretched woman, he just wasn't
strong enough, and this cut down his pride so much he had gone into a 
sort of depression. He must get stronger, he would escape New Year's 
day. 

Okay, now I will discribe the tourcher he endured for a whole month, he
had just enough food to barely get threw a month, same with water, and 
it was a dark, hot, metel box with two benches, one in the front and 
one in back, a little place for tools such as hammers and saws, it was 
locked up though; so he wouldn't kill himself. No place to sleep even, 
and no bathroom. 

He fell asleep on the cold concreate floor, for the fourth day. 

Now if you think this is bad, just wait. 

There are kids across the globe whom are treated like Jeff, I have a
loving family, and hopefully you do too, but sometime when you are sad 
because of what ever just think of those kids like Jeff and try to pull 
threw, my mother has cancer so i know how tough it is to pull threw 
some things but we just have too. thank you and have a good day. JIGSAW 
Oh yeah if you think i am copying the name of the killer in Saw, then 
it is not true, i came up with it in 2005, just bad luck but i made it 
up. just so did some one else. 


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