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Three Mile Drove, Chapter Three, part two (standard:horror, 4065 words) [4/29] show all parts | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Added: Apr 09 2006 | Views/Reads: 3103/2145 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
continuation of a completed horror story set in remote fenland in the UK | |||
CHAPTER THREE (part two) Darren reached Ely a little after two o'clock, finding a car park close to the main street where the offices of Henley & Son were situated. As he left the confines of the car park, he was surprised to find himself thinking that the place exuded character and a warm charm; it seemed to stand defiant in the face of the isolated wilderness he'd just driven through. As if to emphasise as much he noticed the leaden skies had begun to lighten from the west and the heavy rain relent into a drizzle. He found the solicitor's office at the foot of the hill on Main Street, just before the bend leading down to the river. It's wide, double fronted windows seemed to provide it with the air of an estate agent rather than a solicitor, and only the name Henley & Son, solicitors, in large blue print on the door told him otherwise. The dismal conditions seemed to have deterred people from taking to the city's streets and likewise the solicitor's office was empty apart from a receptionist, who sat primly with her spectacles perched on the end of a sharp nose, glancing up as he walked in. Darren introduced himself and wondered whether he suffered from excessive body odour by the way she blinked when he approached the desk. ‘Oh yes, Mr. Henley is expecting you,' she muttered, pivoting round in her swivel chair and pressing a button on her intercom, ‘please go through.' Darren took the few steps leading through the reception area to a small corridor, at the end of which was open door. ‘Come in Mr. Goldwater,' a small looking, portly man with a round and reddened face beckoned from behind a walnut desk, ‘a foul day for your journey I'm afraid,' he stretched his hand out to meet Darren's, forming a limp handshake suggesting formality rather than greeting. ‘Do sit down,' he said, offering an easy chair on the near side of his desk while he opened a drawer, taking out a file. The faint smile Henley had displayed disappeared immediately he flicked through the folder. He took from it a small cellophane bag containing a set of keys and dangled them from his fingertips as though he thought they might contain the remnants of The Plague. ‘I have to tell you Mr.Goldwater, that Old Bridge Farm might not be all that you were expecting,' Henley said, in the manner of someone whose job it was to convey disappointing news. He placed his fists under his chin and regarded Darren thoughtfully, as if expecting that disappointment to be prematurely reflected on the curly haired man's face. ‘You see Mr.Goldwater, the deceased was something of a recluse, and the bungalow you have inherited is, for want of a more apt description, in a tumbledown state. You might find it a costly enterprise to renovate.' Henley reclined in his high backed chair, ‘I wouldn't imagine it would provide adequate accommodation unless you invested; apart from that it wouldn't have much of a resale-able value, now would it?' Darren swallowed to conceal his rising resentment. He didn't like solicitors; he felt they were the one species you could generalise on with a degree of certainty. They charged exorbitant rates, judged themselves to be above the level of common understanding, and above all he'd yet to meet one who didn't speak as though he had a plum in his mouth. It was as if the profession demanded it. ‘You will find Bramble Dyke between Ely and Littleport, I believe it is signposted,' Henley said, his face set as though it had been moulded in a plaster cast of contempt for people who existed in lower levels than himself. Darren took the keys, smiling faintly before assuming Henley's now austere stare. “Well,” he thought, “if I do renovate the place and put it on the market there won't be any takings for supercilious old bastards like you.” Although the rain had relented and the sky opened out into a faint yellow haze, darkness was already beginning to close in as Darren left Ely, bound for Bramble Dyke. He'd found the journey boring and that had probably exacerbated his feeling of tiredness, but no doubt a string of Click here to read the rest of this story (347 more lines)
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