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Golden Absence (standard:romance, 199 words) | |||
Author: KShaw | Added: Oct 09 2005 | Views/Reads: 3587/0 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
When the closeness of a body is enough...even if that body is a shell of what once was | |||
It ‘appens over a period of time, conversation slackening to silence, the ol' girl's bumpy hands working instinctively, her mind deep in thought, remembering, knitting a cardigan for the ol' man, forty nine years her husband. It happens imperceptibly slowly, through a stage when forgetful is funny, till the rhythm of relationship is interrupted, never to be the same. They cannot, like many companionable couples, call at will upon intimacy. Lifelong companions, unspeaking, they endure the absurdity of blossoming illness. The once surfeit of his warmth, never staunched by sleep, has slipped, finally, into the icy chill of non recognition. Through the window she watches the moon cast its light across the valley from behind ponderous cloud, shedding monochrome shadows over the hills. She lowers her head, continuing the clacking of needles. Brahms gentles her mind while the ‘ol' man' sits staring into yellow flickering flames, wearing the pullover she had knit him for Christmas. As a war bride she had known loneliness, yet somehow this was worse, for she knew, now, he was never coming home. Disease spreads through him, like a hawk, picking him clean, leaving just the stone terrace face as a façade to his absence. Tweet
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