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Jimmy Part 3 (standard:mystery, 768 words) [3/3] show all parts
Author: lowelldamAdded: Jan 14 2005Views/Reads: 2691/0Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
The story of a serial killer with a twist
 



Jimmy had just finished putting the jar away when he heard a noise from
behind.  He froze.  He was afraid to turn around, was afraid of getting 
caught at what he was just doing.  The noise got closer.  Someone was 
walking up the ravine towards him.  His fear could only hold him for a 
short while, he had to see what was behind him.  He slowly turned 
around. 

Callie Wellston had just had her eighth birthday.  She decided she was
old enough to walk to the park by herself.  After playing for a little 
while her curiosity got ahold of her.  She felt old enough and brave 
enough to walk through the creekbed up into the ravine.  She started 
walking the bed stopping occasionally to look under a rock or small log 
on the bank.  she was hoping to find a salamander.  She had seen them 
here when she was here with her parents and wanted to catch one to take 
home with her as a souviner.  As she got closer to the deeper part of 
the ravine closest to the railroad tracks she saw a boy.  He was a 
large boy but she was not afraid today.  She walked deeper back into 
the ravine.  The boy was drinking something from a strange water 
bottle.  He finished it and put the bottle in his backpack.  Callie 
decided she wanted a playmate today and headed for the boy. 

Jimmy saw a small girl walking towards him along the bank of the creek. 
His fear evaporated quickly.  "Its just a girl." he thought.  "What 
could she possibly do."  He turned away from the girl and headed for 
the tracks. 

Callie saw the boy and recognized him as soon as he turned around and
showed his face.  He was the large boy that all the others including 
her brother teased.  "Hey wait for me." she said he turned and headed 
for the tracks.  The boy ignored her and kept on going.  " Hey don't 
go.  I just want to play." 

Jimmy kept on walking, his pace quickening as the girl spoke.  He didn't
feel like playing anymore today.  He had finished what he came here for 
and wanted to get home.  He didn't need a little girl tagging along 
with him. 

Callie was getting frustrated with the boy as he kept ignoring her. 
"Wait for me Jumbo Jimmy."  she called out to him.  She had heard the 
other kids call him this name for years and he never seemed to care. 

Jimmy heard the name and stopped dead in his tracks.  Now even little
girls were calling him this.  It was too much.  He turned on the girl, 
anger clearly showing on his face and in his eyes.  "Don't call me 
that." he shouted at the girl. 

Callie was glad to see the boy stop, but when she saw his face as he
turned around she became scared.  There was something in his eyes that 
she didn't like.  She bent down and picked up a couple of large rocks 
that were lying near her feet.  She felt like she needed to get away 
from him as soon as she could.  She turned and started to run. 

Jimmy picked up a couple of rocks himself and gave chase.  "Wait for me
you little bitch!" he shouted as he chased her.  He threw one of his 
rocks striking the girl in the back.  She fell from the impact.  Jimmy 
closed the distance between them. 

Callie lay in the creek with tears running down her face from the pain
the rock had caused and from the fear that was gripping ahold of 
her.She turned while she got up and saw that Jimmy was almost on top of 
her.  she threw one of the rocks as hard as she could.  It caught Jimmy 
by suprise as it struck him on his temple driving him to his knees. 

Jimmy fell to his knees as an explosion of pain hit his forehead.  His
hand went up to his head instictively.  When he brought it down he saw 
the blood that the rock had brought forth.  His mind began to race.  He 
was bleeding again and the little girl was the cause of it.  He wanted 
her to pay for this travesty.  He picked up the biggest rock he could 
and got up running towards the girl.  His eyes were wide with anger as 
he brought the rock down on the girls head.  She slumped down into the 
creek with blood dripping from the large cut the rock had caused.  
Jimmy fell with a flump into the creek.


   



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