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Estrella (standard:other, 1229 words) | |||
Author: Hope | Added: Apr 19 2004 | Views/Reads: 3462/2273 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
this is a story about a little girl's love for her mother | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story hitting a vulture.He was injured and was being beaten to death. Little Estrella not afraid for herself went and stopped those children.She picked up the bird that would feed on dead bodies and brought it home in her arms.At the sight of this Solana was shocked.But she let her little star, rescue her bird and sent her to the bird hospital to support her growing spirit.Solana knew that her little star would one day shine in the night sky the brightest. Luna started getting bitter.He was not strong like Solana. But now Solana was too weak to keep him together.He was trapped by his past. This beautiful creature he had fought to make his wife. He had two beautiful children with her. Who were now 8 and 11.How was he supposed to guide them without her? He needed her.He was not ready to deal with life without her.He didn't know how to be a single parent. He was afraid and unlike Estrella who felt pain and kept it inside Luna got angry and took it out wherever and on whoever he could.He became a bitter man. Estrella remembered that day clearly.She was 10 years old. Her mother was in the hospital.She was very ill.She recalled her conversation with her mother lying on that hospital bed.She was telling her mummy don't give up. We have to go and travel together.We have to do so many things together.But Solana had given up.She didn't want to suffer anymore.Five years had passed and the illness had killed her spirit and eaten her soul. She told Estrella about her dream the night before.She was in a temple and a man covered in mud was standing infront of her. He was giving Solana his hand.He told her that he had come to take her pain away. She told Estrella he was Shiva and he was going to create a painless life for her.But she didn't want to hear about anything that would take her mother away. Her mother was a fighter.Not this person she was pretending to be, who had given up on life. Estrella left her mother in that hospital angry thinking that she didn't love her enough.She had given up on her.Four hours later she was told that Solana was asking for her. She ran to the hospital and by the time she reached.Solana was lying there with her eyes closed never to open them again. The man covered in mud had won. Her mother left her hand and took his. For Estrella he was not the creator but the destroyer. He had destroyed her happiness by taking her mother away.That was the day she lost her faith and started to fight GOD!!! The one she was named after. Tweet
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