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The Third Planet 4- Greetings, Mandy (youngsters:fantasy, 737 words) [4/4] show all parts | |||
Author: fiss | Added: Feb 13 2004 | Views/Reads: 4571/2253 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Evil has encountered the sun and plans to take over the Universe. What can the surviving prince of the sun, Azyla, do to save other species? | |||
code problem: ¡°¡±are suppose to be quotation marks("") ,these are commas !these are exclaimation marks and ¡® and ¡¯,these are apostrophies(') Ok This is my life Ok This is castle life But it¡¯s not Yes it is No. Look at me. Your life is mine. A hand reached towards me. I felt the burning hand reach me, deep inside me, and start pulling all the spirit out of me. ¡°NO!!!!!!!!!¡± I woke by the sound of my own voice. What was that? I rubbed my temples, my head felt as if it was about to burst open. I had the dream again. It¡¯s a nightmare that had been hunting me ever since I started castle life¡ Like it¡¯s not my life Yeah, right. I sneered at the thought. If it¡¯s not my life, whose is it? Shaking the eerie feeling off. It¡¯s about midnight, three more hours until Rosy and Amy will wake up. I realized I¡¯d been sweating, so I slid out of my bed and took some robes out of the closet. Nah, I looked at them, and hung them back on the closet. I wanted some free clothes. I guess I will sneak on those white T-shirt and trousers in the closet. It doesn¡¯t matter before they wake up, it doesn¡¯t matter anyways, since Rose¡¯s color is red and Amy is dark yellow. White represents the angel, but there ain¡¯t no angel here. Not yet. So it really doesn¡¯t matter. Eh? I took the clothes and put them on. They actually fit me, like it was meant for me. ************************************************************************ ***************************** ¡°WHAT¡¯S WRONG WITH YOU?¡± I heard Azyla yell at the top of his lungs, ¡°YOU KNOW YOU¡¯RE NOT SUPPOSE TO BE THERE! YOU COULD HAVE BEEN KILLED! YOU OUTTA UR WITS OR SUMTHING? LOOK AT HER! JUST WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?¡± ¡°Sorry,¡± a male voice replied, stranger¡¯s voice ¡°I... I just didn¡¯t want to see you so depressed like that.¡± Azyla sighed, and all was quiet for a while. Then he said, ¡°I¡¯d rather be depressed for the rest of my life then to loose you two. Now go get some rest.¡± ¡°What about Mandy?¡± the stranger I didn¡¯t recognize asked. ¡°Leave her here. I will take care of her. She needs 24-hour care.¡± Then there was the deafening silence. Azyla sighed once more after a few minutes and walked away, leaving the sound of footsteps ringing down the hallway. I tiptoed out to where they were talking. On the ground lay a coffin-like case, and inside the case was a girl with short hair and dark twists over her. I mean twists. It looks like the parts of her body were tissue and a hand had twisted the tissue, making the skin twisted. It looked horrible. ¡°That¡¯s a spell.¡± Azyla said quietly behind me. ¡°Wow.¡± Scared the wits out of me. ¡°A spell?¡± ¡°Yep. Well, kind of. She¡¯s hurt.¡± Click here to read the rest of this story (80 more lines)
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