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A Storm Has Raine Part 2 (standard:horror, 1869 words) [2/2] show all parts | |||
Author: shadowsinflames | Added: Dec 11 2003 | Views/Reads: 2641/2028 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Raine and Rod are on the hunt but what they find shakes firmly their belief in immortality. | |||
The sun had only just set, the barely visible rays in the west stinging my skin. My hunger easily overrode the pain of the sun, I had to find blood. The neighborhood around us was alive with people coming and going, their seductive scents calling to us, making my head spin. It was beyond difficult to control myself as the desire to just kill threatened to whelm my spirit. I understood now what a temptation my friends and I had posed to the creature that had changed us. I would have found us irresistable. We were desperate to quench the burning inside that made everything else pale in comparison. Neither of us were willing to kill so close to where we had slept the night before, with a little luck we could continue to sleep there for a while longer. As we moved so fast, no mortal eye could have viewed us, a haunting thought took place in my head. What if, when we fed, our bites spread the virus, changing our victims into similar hunters? I wasn't sure that I wanted to bring more of our kind into existance. The more predators, the less prey, and the better chance of being discovered. This thought sent chills down my back. I grabbed Rod and brought him to a thundering halt, shakingly asking, 'What happens when we bite our victims? Will they become like us or just die?' I didn't even want them to die, I had been one of them only a day ago. Enjoying all the humans enjoy, the idea of murdering them to satisfy my hunger was difficult to contemplate. I could tell from the stunned expression on Rod's face that this thought had not yet occurred to him, but now that I had introduced it to him, he wasn't going to shake it off easily. 'How would I know?' his answer was short and bitter, and seemed to recoil with the potency of a venomous snake. I'd never heard Rod, who had the answers to everything, snap at someone before and it felt like a slap in the face. If I'd been weaker, tears would have stung my eyes and my bottom lip would have quivered. Rather, I had to bite my tongue to swallow a nasty rebuke that would have stirred the waters up more. Right now, we had to join forces not viciously rip at each other. That would lead to our ensured doom. Swallowing my insult, I shrugged my shoulder to recieve another response from him, 'Anyway, at this point, I don't care. I'm starving and could eat a f*cking horse, a great big horse.' I couldn't argue his logic because I was to the same level of stomach growling. We had to find something to eat before we turned upon each other. Then, from a house a bit further down the road, came the distinct scent of death or impending death. The rich aroma was so tempting that I was moving towards it before I even realized I had moved my feet. I wanted to partake in the rewards of the reaper, savor the letting of blood. I could feel Rod in the same, blood induced trance, being pulled involuntarily towards the siren call of death. The front door was unlocked, and we slipped in steathily, our breathing on hold in the thrill of the hunt. The scent of death was all around us, threatening to bury us forever in the lust for it's goods. Rod crept into the living room as I stood there, inhaling deeply several times, trying to handle the sensory overload. It was like breathing heaven. It was a smell that my human mind never would have detected, and if it had, would have only dismissed it as nerves. I was so busy reveling in this pleasure that I almost missed the sounds of a scuffle in the living room. Almost, but not quite. Without hesitance, I leapt into the living room, prepared to take on whatever was happening. Rod sat on the couch, a girl in between his legs, his hands tilting her head so that her neck was bared to him, while her arms flailed in a panicked pattern. His eyes were closed, his face serene, as he drank thirstily from her. Jealousy and hunger flared within me and I bounced over the couch, next to him. 'Ever hear of sharing?' I asked, licking my lips, trying to ignore the terror shining in her blue eyes. She regarded me as if I were some kind of monster, wide eyed panic, no sign of hope. It seemed to bury a blade deep within my chest, proving that what was human had died last night. Rod opened his eyes, looked disappointed but obligingly pushed her my way. As my teeth sank into the tender flesh of her neck, I felt Rod lock contact again. Click here to read the rest of this story (97 more lines)
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