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Derek's Quest (standard:fantasy, 765 words) | |||
Author: lowelldam | Added: Nov 29 2003 | Views/Reads: 3418/4 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Derek The Paladin is searching for answers. | |||
Derek dismounts from his steed to view the tracks he has spotted below. He has been on the trail of Corthulis The Grey for three days now. He is closing slowly but he is sure that he will catch the elf soon. The tracks are extremely fresh, maybe just a day old. Derek looks ahead in the distance trying to spot his adversary. He pulls out his waterskin and takes a quick drink, then offers his horse a drink from his cupped hands. He mounts his horse and heads forward, following the tracks that Corthulis has left for him. The night has slowly crept up on Derek and he decides to set up camp for the evening. He hops smoothly from his horse and ties him to the nearest tree. He slips the feedback off from the side of his saddle and places it around his horses neck. He wants to start a fire to take the chill off from the cool evening air but decides against it. He does not want to alert Corthulis to his approach. Derek pulls his bedroll from his saddle and lays it across a soft patch of ground. He then pulls himself a bit of jerky from his bag and takes another drink from his skin. He will need to fill it in the morning. He lays on his bedroll and slowly drifts off into a restless sleep. Derek and his brother Evaus and standing together with there swords drawn. Corthulis is in front of them. The elf is mumbling something that neither of them can understand. There is a sudden burst. Xaquel, a deamon from somewhere deep in the nine hells is now standing next to Corthulis. They begin laughing at the two brothers. They raise there hands in unison. Evaus charges, striking Xaquel on the side of the head. The sword drives deep into the skull. Xaquel screams in apperent pain then reaches out and grasps the sword from Evaus. His laughter becomes deafening. Evaus' sword is ripped from his hands and is turned against him. Xaquel strikes him three times. Corthulis pulls his sword and also strikes Evaus. Derek stands there stunned as his brother rushes the two. He watches as Evaus strikes a blow that should have killed the deamon. He watches as Evaus is struck in the leg with his own sword. He watches as the blunt edge of the sword strikes the side of his head. The sound of that blow breaks him free from whatever held him there. He charges as the elf strikes his brother. He sees the blood from the wounds on his brother and drifts away. His sword does the work for him, he is in his battle frenzy. His sword strikes blow after blow on Xaquel. The deamon drops. Derek turns his focus on the elf. His sword finds the meaty part of Corthulis' left leg, leaving it a bloody mess. There is a bright clap of lightning. Derek feels the blow that strikes the side of his helmet. He looks around dazed trying to see what hit him. He heres the rumble of thunder coming from behind him. He falls to the ground as the thunder becomes closer. Xaquel dissappears. Corthulis swings his sword once more and strikes Derek on the other side of his head. Derek lay on the ground as the thunder surrounded him. He watched as Corthulis drifted into the Grey Woods and out of sight. He looked over at his brother lying just a few feet from him. He saw the blood flowing freely from the side of his brothers head. He sees the beasts surronding him as he drifts off into the darkness. Derek awakens from his dream expecting to see his brother lying dead beside him. He is not there, just like he was not there when he awakened from there battle. The people of Moran had taken them both back to there small keep just outside of the Grey Woods. They had saved Derek, but they knew nothing of Evaus. He had not been there when they had arrived. Derek had many questions to ask them but knew that he had to hurry, Corthulis was getting farther and farther away. He had to get back to the battlefield and find the trail that Corthulis had left. Derek stands and looks around into the darkness, trying to spot any sign of Corthulis in the distance. He walked over to his horse and sat by the tree he tied the horse to. There would be no more sleep for him this night. Tweet
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