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Life Springs Eternal (standard:science fiction, 942 words) | |||
Author: pjlawton | Added: Nov 22 2003 | Views/Reads: 3451/2262 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
What if there really was a fountain of youth? A young traveler is about to find out. | |||
Life Springs Eternal By P.J. Lawton It was April 1st 1850. He was casually riding down the country lane when he came upon the old man sitting against the hedgerow fence. Seeing a feeble wave he stopped his horse to inquire if help was needed. “Are you ill? Do you need some assistance? “No young man,” came the quiet quavering voice, “I am not ill, just tired, very, very tired. However, yes, I could do with some assistance. There is somewhere I must be today at exactly noon. One minute past is to late.” “Well, where is this place that's so important that you have to be there at exactly noon, and not a minute past?” The old man realized that the young man was having sport with him but it didn't matter. He could not go there alone! “There,” he said pointing to a distant hilltop cover with boulders and a small stand of trees. “Hum, my old friend, that's got to be at least two kilometers away. It would be quite a ways out of my way. I need to be at the market by noon. Helping you would make it awfully hard to get there on time. Can you make it worth something to me?” “Young fellow, whether or not to help me get to that hilltop could be the most important decision you will ever make. What if I give you something worth more than all the tea in China, all the gold and jewels in the world?” With a slight laugh he said. “Sure old man, you look like wealthiest man in the world. Just what could you give me that would be worth so much?” The old man stared in the young mans eyes for a moment then quietly said one word. “Immortality.” With a shocked expression the young man started to speak. Before he could do so the old man raised his hand. “Wait. Help me to my destination and I will share with you my secret, the secret of eternal live. But, we must hurry!” The young man pulled the old man to his feet and helping him into the saddle, started a slow walk for distant hilltop. Along the way he was told the following tale. The old mans voice was quiet but surprisingly strong. “ One day many, many years ago I was in the same position that you are today. I came upon an old frail old man sitting by the hedgerow fence. For rendering him assistance I was given the secret of eternal live. I see that you are still skeptical. Believe me, everything I am about to tell you is very true. You see, once every 50 years at exactly noon on April 1st a grand phenomenon occurs.” Pointing toward the hilltop he continued. “On the far side of that hill is a small cave. Inside the cave is a dried up spring. Dried up that is except for one minute once every 50 years. For one minute and one minute only sparking clear cool water flows. If someone drinks of the water he will in essence live forever. There is one important thing that you must remember, to be immortal, to live forever, you must be there at precisely the set date and time. If you do not drink from the spring you will die. The spring does not give you eternal youth, but simply returns you to your youth. You will age in a normal manner. If you choose to drink from the spring you become the keeper, a responsibility you must not take lightly.” “But what does the keeper do? Why is that so important?” “As the keeper you must ensure that nothing happens to the cave. Should Click here to read the rest of this story (45 more lines)
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