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Author: Charlotte D'Espoir | Added: Jul 08 2003 | Views/Reads: 3500/2329 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
I wasn't sure what category to place this under. It is a terribly sad story about a girl who had come to rest her existence on one thing. A person. And as most people do at least once in their lives, they let her down. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story How could he do this to me? How could he?? I hated him. I hated whoever Jenny was, I hated everyone. I hated God. i hate my parents. I hate this world. I hate life. I hate myself. I lie on my floor in a pool of my own blood and I'm crying. Then it was blissfully calm. It felt as if I were being freed. Then it hurt. My arms, my body, my head. Ten times worse than before. It hurt so badly I couldn't move, I couldn't breath. Then she felt nothing. ~ She walked into the living room placing her keys and purse on the table. God, she had a headache. She headed towards the kitchen intent on getting some aspirin. As she stepped inside she gasped, her hands flying to her mouth. She took a trembling step back. On the floor was her sister facing away, as if asleep. There was blood everywhere and at her outstretched hand was a cutlery knife. Drawers were spilled out onto the floor and the floor was coated in blood. She looked down at her feet and saw her brand new pumps standing in the blood. She dove forward to her sister's side and kneeled in the blood. It was still warm and clung her knees through the stockings. Turning her sister over to check for her pulse, she screamed. Her sister's face. It was so sad and peaceful. Her lips here parted, tinged with blood. She was pale, oh so pale. But her eyes. Her eyes were open wide and she continued to scream as she fell into their depths. She screamed a wordless blood curdling cry, a cry so tormented that the earth shuddered and that night, it rained hard outside, flooding the rivers, and washing away cars and fallen trees. ~ They found her like that. Clinging to her sister's now cold dead body, mumbling to herself. An empty vessel for a once troubled soul. They watched the traumatic scene and wondered where the parents were. There had been no sign of them. They found her holding her sister's dead body three day's after she had died. After she hadn't answered the phone nor showed up to work. They found her huddled over a lifeless form, sitting in a pool of blood, speaking to things that no one could see. Tweet
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