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The Maple Town Murders part 1. The discovery in the Forest (standard:horror, 3006 words) [1/3] show all parts | |||
Author: Richard J Cobain | Updated: Jun 02 2003 | Views/Reads: 3619/2497 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
George Peterson is drawn to a part of the forest one day that he has never seen before. Little does he know the horrible secrets it holds. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story He was scared by the time he got there and had to sit down. When his nerves had subsided slightly he went to his window, which overlooked the driveway in the hope of seeing his father return. It was a horrible night, rain pelted the window and thunder boomed in the sky lighting it as if God was taking photographs with a giant camera at regular intervals. Why the hell was his father out on a night like this for and was he even coming back?. This was a new thought, which troubled him no end. A father who beat you up from time to time was better than no father at all. A while later he saw the darkened outline of his father trudging slowly up the driveway and seemingly coming from the forest direction. A flash of lightening illuminated the sky at that moment and George was horrified to see that his father's hands and jumper were covered in blood. He jumped into bed straight away, to avoid suspicion. He heard his father enter the house and close the door. Now he was coming up the stairs very slowly and quietly. He then walked past his own bedroom and stood outside George's half open door. George's heart was pounding with fear, what was his father up to; he was never so terrified in his life. Eventually after what seemed like a lifetime his father turned back and crept to his room. As Jack made his way to bed it was the hardest thing in the world for George to keep silent. He kept thinking that his father could hear his breathing and his thinking. After a while he heard his fathers snores and knew he was safe. He let out a sigh of relief. He couldn't get the image of the blood on his father out of his mind however. “Maybe I imagined it” he said to himself, “I had to have imagined it”. “After all the flash only lasted a second” But deep down he knew the truth, his eyes hadn't deceived him. So now a new and much more important question had to be answered why was there blood on his fathers clothes. Later that night when he had finally gotten to a troubled sleep George had a very unpleasant nightmare. In it he was standing in the clearing, he heard a noise behind him and turned to see his mother hanging off the lone tree. Her once milky white complexion was gone, her skin was horribly grey and her neck had gone blue around the noose of the rope. She was covered with dirt and leaves and both her wrists were slashed. She suddenly opened her eyes startling George into stumbling backwards. “What happened to you mom?” he asked. “Why did you leave me?” “You're father killed us” she spoke in a voice that wasn't human. “What are you talking about?” he asked in confusion. His mother pointed behind her without taking her dead eyes away from him; there were six women and two young girls standing someway behind her ranging from about seven to thirty five. They too were covered in dirt and had cuts and bruises all over them. Some of their throats were savagely ripped open others looked like they had been hit with blunt objects. “No” wept George “he wouldn't do that”, “Dig us up” she asked him and then screamed it “dig us up”. He woke up covered in sweat. Was the dream true, could it have been some kind of premonition? Was his father a murderer?. The more he thought about it the more it made sense and the truth soon became painfully clear. First of all was the fact that Jack had raging mood swings, which could be set off at any time and for no obvious reason. Second was his mother's mysterious disappearance. Thirdly George remembered hearing stories of young hitch hikers going missing in this very town and the nearby town of Lake View. And lastly was his father's absence in the forest tonight and returning with the bloodstained clothes. All these facts put together seemed to point the finger quite convincingly at his father. He didn't get any more sleep that night. Early the next morning before Jack awoke George left the house and headed into the forest to look for one more piece of evidence which would incriminate his father beyond doubt, but before he did he crept into Jacks room and took a look at his boots, they were covered in mud and leaves, he had been in the forest. He could see the tracks left by his father the night before and they seemed to George's utter surprise to be heading towards the clearing. It was a beautiful day, much like the day that he first discovered it but that didn't matter. What did matter was what the hell he was going to do if he did find more evidence. “I hope to God I'm wrong” he said to himself as he walked through the endless rows of tall, thick Maple trees which seemed to be closing in on him as he went. Finally he came to the clearing. It looked different to him today, the tranquillity and purity of the place, which had been so strong that he almost felt like he could reach out and touch it was gone. Now it just looked like a secret waiting to be discovered. George suddenly realised that he didn't care for this place anymore. It had changed somehow. It wasn't his own and it never had been. It looked the same but it just didn't feel the same. He walked over to the lone tree that his mother had been hanging off in his dream. Even in the light of day it looked quite spooky. He tried to make out what made the tree seem different to him than the others but he couldn't do it, but something was different all the same. It almost felt like the tree was looking at him. It sounded crazy but it was the truth. He walked into its shade and a shiver immediately ran through his body. It felt much colder in there for some reason. He was scaring himself badly at this point and was just about to leave when he spotted something out of the corner of his eye. About fifteen yards from where he stood was a small mound of earth as if the ground had been recently dug up. He had never noticed this until now. He got down on his knees and began scraping away the dirt with his bare hands. Before long a human hand was visible. He stumbled backwards and was violently sick. When he got his breath back he filled up the hole with his foot trying not to look at the lifeless hand. Suddenly he broke down in a streaming fit of tears, as he never had before. There could be no doubt about it now. His father was a killer. It was an unbelievable shock despite of the fact that he suspected him anyway. How long had he been getting away with this for? Why was he doing it in the first place?. Anger seemed to take over him and his whole body began to shake. He wasn't going to get away with this anymore. He walked home slowly oblivious to everything around him with the beginnings of a plan in his head, a plan to kill his father. All that day George convinced himself that killing his father was the right thing to do and by the time it got dark he was actually looking forward to doing it. It was a strange thing saying goodnight to his dad as he went to bed knowing what he was about to do. He lifted the pillow on his bed for what seemed like the hundredth time that day. The meat cleaver was still there, newly sharpened. He got into bed cradling the knife as though it were a baby. About an hour later he heard his father turn in for the night. “I'll give you half an hour to fall asleep and then you're history” he whispered to himself. “History, history, history, history...” He woke suddenly and looked at his watch. “Shit” he gasped “I've been asleep for three hours”. He slowly got out of bed and crept towards his father's room. Curiously he didn't feel strange about what he was doing. He took a deep breath and opened the door. His father wasn't in bed; his boots and jacket were missing. George ran furiously back to his room threw on some clothes and headed for the forest. The moon was full and the knife gleamed in his hand, he couldn't seem to take his eyes off the long blade, it was more than a little hypnotizing. He walked the path avoiding the hollows and fallen logs flawlessly. It was a very cold night and he could see his breath floating in front of him. A slight fog was visible in front of him impairing his vision slightly but he could have found his way there blindfolded. He had only one thing on his mind as he neared his destination, revenge. He could have sworn he heard his mothers voice from somewhere behind him. “Kill him, kill him” she was saying. “Yes mother” he replied with a smile and walked on. When he got to the edge of the clearing he could hear grunting noises. He slipped quietly behind a tree and watched with his breath held. His father was raping the corpse of a young woman. “You sick bastard” George muttered under his breath. He didn't realise how tightly his hand was wrapped around the knife handle. His knuckles were going white and his arms began to shake uncontrollably with immense rage. After his father was done he picked up a shovel and began digging the unfortunate victims grave near the “castle tree” as George now called it. He whistled as he dug. “Dig, dig, dig” George spoke to himself without knowing. “You're digging your own grave asshole, tire yourself out”. He watched on never taking his eyes off Jack for a second. He was seeing his father in a new light; he was finally seeing his real father. Jack finished the grave after a while dragged the body into it and began to fill it up. It was time. George left his position and circled around the clearing until he was facing his fathers back. “This is it you fucker” he whispered as he crept forward from the safety of the trees to the danger of the clearing. Once again his knife hand began to shake but he didn't notice. He was thirty feet away, now twenty. Sweat began to pour down his face, what if he turned around now? What if he can hear me?. Ten feet away. Every step seemed like a mile, like eterninty. Finally he was right behind his father, he was so close that he thought he could actually smell evil coming from him. He lifted the knife above his head and screamed, “this is for mom” as he buried the blade deep in his father's left shoulder. Jack howled in agony and surprise, the noise penetrated a wide radius of the forest sending many birds into the air for safety. But incredibly Jack didn't go down. He stayed on his feet and showing superhuman strength he pulled the knife out and punched his son hard in the face breaking his nose with a loud snap and sending blood gushing into the air. George hit the ground with a thump and saw stars. When his vision returned Jack was standing over him with the shovel. He raised it high into the air and spoke in a voice, which wasn't his “you should have minded your own business Georgie” and with that he brought the shovel down again and again long after the screaming had ceased. As he stood over the body of his son a single tear rolled down his face. “Why couldn't you stay away George” he sobbed in his normal voice. “Why didn't you just stay away from here”. As a full moon shone down on the scene of many horrific murders Jack dropped the shovel with a heavy conscience and disappeared into the darkness of the forest. Epilogue A search party found George's body five days later. When the surrounding ground was dug up the mutilated bodies of ten women including his mother were found. Although his shovel was recovered and a piece of his clothing was discovered close by Jack Peterson has never been seen since. THE END Richard J Cobain Copyright© Kieran McCarthy 2001 Tweet
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