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Nothing But Stars (standard:Inspirational stories, 4134 words) | |||
Author: Mick@Nite | Added: Apr 27 2003 | Views/Reads: 3747/2379 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A man awakens on the side of a frozen highway. Together, reader and protagonist learn the truth about what happened that terrible night. | |||
The first thing he remembered -- after the worst of it was over -- were the stars. Looking to the heavens, incandescent bodies glimmered and winked at him from a lush canvas of indigo: bejeweled timekeepers, watchers of the universe, billions of light years away. Oh my God, he thought, his eyes overflowing with the splendor of diamonds and sapphires suspended in space, they're beautiful. Nothing but stars, so many of them, infinite and eternal. Dazzling gems spilled upon velvet, blushing flirts, seducing him from celestial thrones. If only he could touch one, feel it in his hand, share in its luminosity. He reached for one, a great and pulsating jewel, just to see if he could. Movement was not difficult, just...awkward. He could feel gravity's weight but it acted upon him as if from every direction possible: drawing his hand to where he wanted it to go yet still trying to hold it in place. Beautiful, he thought once again, reaching for something he was not yet prepared to touch. An elusive stillness surrounded him, not real silence but rather a low, rushing pulse: a heartbeat; a sound he imagined the unborn might hear within their mother's wombs. It was the sound of sanctuary. He could not recall how he had found his way into such a surreal and tranquil setting and at that moment, he did not care, but he believed he had lost consciousness -- was quite sure of it in fact -- and was now just coming to, lost somewhere between awareness and circumstance. His efforts to grasp the heavens continued and for one splendid moment he swore he had actually touched the star he sought: not that he had reached it really, but more like it had reached him. This novel world, this marvelous environment beckoned but for one instant when he afforded himself a single distraction: a different sort of light, one that was artificial and unnatural. The night sky began to flicker in reds and blues and in turning his attention his ears were filled with something other than the satisfying whoosh he found so comforting. Unrecognizable and unpleasant, these intrusive sights and sounds rudely drew his attention even further away from the wondrous ambiance above him and back down to the lonely frozen earth on which he lay. The ground was icy cold though he was far too numb to recognize it. As reality domesticated his senses the stars above him began to lose their magic and suddenly they were nothing more than the cold distant bodies he would too easily ignore on any other night. The light of his own world filled his bleary eyes and as he focused them downward the shadows yielded and his vision began to clear. He did not like what he saw. Before him he could barely make out a gaping fissure of twisted metal: torn and fractured beams of steel snarling and lashing out at him like some dreadful monster. Behind this disarray the red and blue lights -- the monsters terrible eyes -- grew larger and more sinister in rhythmic, orchestrated winks. As the radiance of colored light intensified, so too did that awful noise. Wailing and screaming, jarring his senses further into focus, he slowly recognized the morose cry of approaching emergency vehicles. Orientation suddenly felt crucial. His eyes darted wildly about, anxiously scanning the remainder of his surroundings. The ground was powdered lightly with a fresh dusting of snow and he seemed to be in some sort of depression. Shallow walls of earth encompassed him and in one paralyzing thought he imagined he might be entombed. Stricken with terror, unable to obey his brain's demand to rise and scramble from his would be grave, he returned his attention to the mangled catastrophe above him and with clearing eyes and mind forced himself, for his own sanities sake, to acknowledge that it was not a monster at all but rather a roadside guardrail (or a former one at that) eviscerated violently by something large; but by what, he could not tell. Faculties gathering but still awash with fear, he began to make out the droning engines of heavy equipment, voices and shouts and the intermittent squawking of police radios. The lights behind the wounded guardrail were quite intense now casting long menacing shadows into his new and frightening world. But it was what he could not see, nor remember, that was far more Click here to read the rest of this story (384 more lines)
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