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| Without you (standard:poetry, 66 words) | |||
| Author: TZ613 | Added: Nov 11 2000 | Views/Reads: 3140/4 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
| My first attempt at poetry, woul appreciate any and all feedback | |||
Your smile is like a sunrise breathing life into an empty heart Your eyes so brown and deep that I cheerfully drown in them every day Radiating beauty from your very presence you force the storm clouds to flee from the sky Just being here is a life preserver to my soul you keep me afloat and give me hope For without you tomorrow never comes Tweet
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