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Fanfare for the Common Man (standard:other, 0 words) | |||
Author: The Dark Master | Added: Jun 14 2001 | Views/Reads: 3285/2218 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
One day that changed everything for a Romanian coal miner. | |||
FANFARE FOR THE COMMON MAN Nicolae Antenescu's ancient alarm clock filled the room with its raucous chorus. The jangling continued for a while and slowly faded into nothingness as the alarm's spring wound down. Nicolae's eyes opened and stared upward into the darkness. It was 4:30 a.m. and the sun had not risen yet. Nicolae's hand slowly went to the light switch on the wall and fumbled with it for a while before finally flipping the old plastic lever. A single light bulb suspended from the ceiling cast its rays upon Nicolae and his wife, Elena. Nicolae's eyes adjusted to the dim light and he stared at the gray wallpaper on the ceiling, sloughing off and spotted with water stains. Nicolae sat up on the mattress and removed the sheets from his body. He turned and put his feet on the cold, wooden floor. Elena stirred in her sleep, unhindered by the light and the alarm clock; it was all such a routine. Nicolae's eyes shifted to the corner of the room and focused on his pile of work clothes. A pair of old black rubber boots, waterproof pants and a jacket, and a plastic helmet mounted with a battery-powered lamp lay stacked in the nook. Another day in the mines, another day at the job. Nicolae slowly rose to his feet and dressed himself. He turned off the light in the room and plodded into the kitchen. A few grimy pots and pans lay scattered about the small, cramped room, and a two-burner gas stove was wedged in the corner next to the sink. Elena had made him his usual ham sandwich and placed it along with a bottle of water in his metal lunch box set on the table. Nicolae picked up the steel box and left the house. Similarly dressed men emerged from their dark apartments and joined up, offering greetings and good humor to their comrades. Nicolae walked to his friend Ion's house a few blocks from his own, and knocked on the wooden door. The door opened momentarily and a tall man walked out. "Morning, Ion," said Nicolae as the two men began walking down the street. "Hi, Nicolae," replied Ion, "Yet another morning." Nicolae coughed a deep, awful cough, stopped for a moment and wheezed. "Ion, I swear it seems that this cough gets worse and worse everyday. I don't know what it's from," said Nicolae breathlessly after his fit subsided. "Probably an allergy since it seems like everyone's got it. So don't worry about it," Ion said sympathetically. The two men continued on in silence and the sun began to rise from the east, bathing the small town of Brasov in its early-morning light. A steam whistle sounded in the distance and the two men could see the towering spires of the refineries and the smokestacks of the factories in the distance. Silhouetted against the sky, thick black smoke poured from the stacks and made its way overhead. The two miners walked a bit farther, until they came to a bus stop packed with fellow workers. A Company man was handing out styrofoam cups filled with hot, black coffee to workers who presented their labor cards. Nicolae and Ion displayed their cards and were given their ration of coffee. The men quickly downed the contents of their cups and threw them into a trash receptacle. Nicolae and Ion were leaning against a concrete wall when another man approached them. He was short and stocky, with a shock of black hair and a thick moustache. Ion and Nicolae looked at each other, unsure of what to do. "Hey Antenescu, still living in that hovel you call an apartment?" sneered the antagonist. "Screw off, you lousy bastard," retorted Nicolae. "Just stating the facts, my good friend. You see, I just bought myself a new apartment near the town square. It's got great plumbing, good lighting, fabulous..." "Go fuck yourself and do yourself a favor, " Ion said coolly to the braggart. "There's a reason why you live alone, Eugen," said Nicolae, "no woman would ever touch you." Eugen Dzherinscu crossed his arms and his mouth twisted into a half-smile as the Company bus pulled into the stop. "Your wife certainly didn't think that way, Antenescu...," snickered Eugen. Nicolae's eyes narrowed. He was about to raise his fist to strike Eugen, when Ion restrained him. "Not now, Nicolae, not now," Ion intervened. Still prickling with anger, Nicolae boarded the bus with the fellow workers and managed to get a seat. The bus filled with workers fresh from their caffeine fix, now ready for the day's work. The decrepit vehicle rattled as it pulled away from the stop and headed toward the factories. Nicolae entertained the thought of murdering Eugen, gladly wrapping his hands around the bastard's fat neck and wringing the life out of him...this man who had attempted to lure his wife away. The bus downshifted as it passed by large heaps of smelted iron and great piles Click here to read the rest of this story (134 more lines)
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