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The Monster Mash (standard:humor, 1003 words) | |||
Author: Reid Laurence | Added: Jul 30 2013 | Views/Reads: 2649/1786 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
In an era of great new medical advancement, a doctor has created a whole new race of people... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “Then...” I began to say. “Exactly what do you think this flag should look like?” “It should have ten colors,” said Peter. “A color for every stitch in our foreheads. But there's something else,” he went on to say, slowing down his speech to emphasize what he was about to tell me. “Something else of equal importance.” “Yes Peter,” answered Dr. Berland. “Please speak freely.” “We don't want to be called 'monsters' anymore. It's very demeaning. We want to be called; 'surgically enhanced' people. “Excellent,” said the doctor. “You've learned so much on your own Peter, you make me feel like a very proud father. The only thing is, it's going to take time now son. Time to make people realize that you're another human being, just like so many others. Then maybe one day, the world will see who you really are inside, not just for the superficial exterior that makes them fear you.” “I want so much to fit in and find my niche in life. But I know, I look different then they do.” “I know Peter, I know.” And with that the monster, or, surgically enhanced Peter picked up the doctor like a rag doll and began hugging him like the huge child of enormous strength and size that he was. But was this a new beginning I wondered? Could the world see things in a different light. Maybe, I thought. Just maybe. After a few years of struggle and a lot of peaceful protest marching had gone by, the surgically enhanced people had made great strides. They went to theaters, restaurants and public libraries without the fear of being stared at or discriminated against and best of all, Peter found himself married to a very cute non-reanimated girl and in a few years time, brought forth the child Peter had always wanted. It was very touching meeting this child in particular, because the parents were so proud of their new baby boy. “Look,” said the mother, holding him up for me to see. “He has his fathers stitches,” and the world had suddenly become a whole lot better place to live in. Tweet
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