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Circle (standard:fantasy, 638 words) | |||
Author: Manwe | Added: Feb 19 2002 | Views/Reads: 3308/1 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The story is about life itself | |||
Circle His cheeks were wet, and now that he thought about it, so were his eyes. Must have been a bug or something. There were lots of bugs this time of year. He looked out over the old garden. It seemed so big, a grassy green hill sloping down into what seemed to be a forest without end. Grandmother had worked for years to get the sides of the hill filled with flowers. Now it looked like a true festival of color. Red hyacinths mixing with yellow tulips, a group of white-as-milk daisies circled by purple violets and, most important of all, dozens of blossoming red roses leading the way to her life’s work; an immense field of forget-me-nots. He felt like he could lie around here all day. Grandma was sitting on the porch, a basket with sandwiches neatly placed on her lap. She beckoned him, asking if he wanted one. He declined, he didn’t feel hungry; also the ball slowly rolling down the hill looked much more appealing than a cheese-sandwich. On his way down, he noticed a small white-bellied bunny-family playing around among the daisies. Apparently, the animals had discovered him as well and decided to run for the forest. Playing with his ball he couldn’t help feeling anxious to follow them a bit, see where they lived and all. It was a small hole, neatly dug between the roots of an old tree. The entrance was clad in a cloak of moss, glittering with the dew of morning. A young bunny stuck its head out, as if confronting him; he smiled at it as it slowly retreated back to safety. As he looked upwards, his eyes met with the old giant’s ancient trunk. Its brown skin had been marked by the years; little holes where drilled in its old wood, signalling that a woodpecker had settled here, a small squirrel climbed toward its home as a mockingbird quietly cleaned its feathers. On one of the branches sat a young woman, her white veil silently waving in the wind. He walked around the tree to join her. Slowly he removed the veil, allowing the afternoon breeze to take it away, plucked a rose and, gently stroking her hair, stuck it next to her ear. He caught himself staring at her eyes. They were so deep; an ocean would pale in comparison. She smiled as she carefully let herself slide from the branch, turned towards him once more to kiss him goodbye and left for the mansion. He slid off and turned his head towards the setting sun. Slowly he closed his eyes, the wind caressing his face. As he opened them again, the tree was gone, a tree-stump with an ink-black raven on it in its place. As he walked back he couldn’t help but notice the garden looking different, the plants seemed weary under the weight of the overwhelming amount of rain piled up on their withered flowers. The red roses were replaced by a dark crimson kind. An old grey rabbit was lying on its side in the field of forget-me-nots, flies feeding off its lifeless body. The ball in his hands was dirty, a remainder of stale air leaking out of it like a final breath. At the mansion a small boy was playing with a ball, a woman clad in a clear white dress carefully watching over him. As a rabbit fled his sight, his wife came out with a plate of sandwiches. “You want a sandwich honey? I made them myself.” A tear slowly rolled over his wrinkled cheek as he walked toward his chair. A mockingbird flew by, chasing a woodpecker so it seemed. His eyes followed them to an old tree, an ancient tree actually, on its highest branch, a white veil silently waving in the wind. END Tweet
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