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Blood Money (chapters nineteen and twenty.) (standard:Suspense, 4451 words) [10/18] show all parts | |||
Author: Hulsey | Added: Sep 24 2011 | Views/Reads: 2297/1735 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
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19 ISLAMABAD PAKISTAN Sucking on a lollypop, Keenan double-checked the address that was written down on a piece of paper. The shabby-looking, whitewashed apartment was certainly not the abode of a wealthy man and was in contrast to the more modern architect of uptown Islamabad. Keenan knocked at the door and was immediately confronted by an unsmiling, tall Asian man. An unsightly scar ran from his right eye to the corner of his mouth. This feature added to the hostility of the character. “I'm looking for Mukhtar Ahmed,” said Keenan, more a demand than a query. The Asian man's eyes settled on the bare-armed stranger's tattoo of a snake coiled around a bloody dagger. “Never heard of him,” spit the young Asian. Keenan's eyes narrowed behind his designer sunglasses. He removed the lollypop from his mouth and tossed it into the gutter, watching as an emaciated dog pounced on it. “Listen, handsome, I'm fucking melting. I've got jet lag and this place reeks like a whore's crutch. I know Mukhtar lives or lived here with friends, and an educated guess tells me that you're probably one of his pals, so let's stop fucking about... When was the last time you saw him?” The Asian purposely allowed his unbuttoned shirt slip aside, to reveal a pistol tucked into his waistband. He bravely prodded Keenan in the chest. “Go home, Englishman. You do not come to Islamabad issuing your fucking threats. I have never heard of Mukhtar and even if I had, I wouldn't tell you where he was.” Keenan was repulsed by the strong stench of pungent spices wafting out from the apartment. He reacted rapidly, reaching out and seizing the unfriendly Pakistani by the throat. He pushed against the weaker man, forcing him inside before relieving him of his weapon. “You little cunt! One, nobody touches me, especially an underfed curry muncher. Two, don't ever call me an Englishman... Do you see this tattoo? Go on, Ghunga, take a look... I gather you've heard of the IRA?” The choking man nodded. “Good. Then you know that you ought to take me seriously... Now, I'll ask again. Where is Mukhtar?” The Asian smiled at his tormentor, an action that provoked Keenan into slapping him savagely across the face. The Irishman pushed the startled host to the ground. “Drop your weapon,” came the order from behind. Keenan hesitated and felt the cold muzzle against the nape of his neck. “I said drop your weapon.” The Irishman obeyed, before facing the older man, who was wearing a white kameez. His face was heavily pocked, his beard unable to hide his disfigurement. “Who are you?” Keenan remained silent. The gunman nodded towards his groaning companion, who was picking himself up from the ground. “Get his passport, Ayub.” The younger man aimed a powerful kick between the legs of Keenan, who fell to his knees. “Say your prayers, English,” he taunted. Click here to read the rest of this story (508 more lines)
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