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strange love (standard:romance, 1311 words) | |||
Author: Anonymous | Added: May 30 2009 | Views/Reads: 9317/3 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
some people are strange when it come to nature but this woman in this story takes the cake | |||
Strange love At the bar set a handsome young man well dressed , holding In his right hand he held a half empty beer, the young woman that has just come into the bar to get her brother who often stopped off at the bar for a drink after his days work at his office which was located down town , she knew what bar he often had a drink at and one of his friend has showed up at his apartment looking for him for a business proposal ,, the young woman found her brother and told him he needed to go home to his apartment , because someone was there needing to speak to him , her brother gave her a light kiss on the cheek and hurried out of the bar , as she was about to leave behind her brother the handsome young man said what your hurry , you beautiful lady, she answered , I just come to get my brother and a man needed to see him pretty bad about a business deal of some sort he is involved in, she answered “ don't leave out so fast and come and set here and let me buy you a drink, he Said, he seem like a perfect Gentleman well dressed , and very polite , maybe a little forward,, his handsome face and him being well mannered made her desire to maybe set a while beside him and get acquainted , what will you have he asked her ? Really I never touch the stuff , and to be honest this is my first time I was even in a bar, well how about a coke he said? Ok maybe a coke she answered,” so what your name she asked, ? My name is Jake Spence, and I am not from this town I was just coming threw here heading up north and thought I would stop at this corner bar and have a beer of two and rest before I go on my way, well that sound nice she said, trying to think of something to say, you haven't told me your name said” im June Norwood , I have lived here in this little town all my life and I am on my last year in college . I plan on going into accounting as my profession she added! That sound like a good thing to do he said:” his friendly warm smile and kind looking face , and sort of captured her interest, he was well dressed and wore and expensive watch , his hair was jet black an well groomed, he looked to be about her age and she become more interested as the conversation continued, they talk on and he talked her into have a mild whiskey just for a social drink and like most woman she agreed just to be friendly, she being sipping on the whiskey he has ordered and it being her first time drinking it rushed to her head and she was not thinking normal , then he pop the question how about you and I leaving this bar and take a drive around your city, and we can talk in private , that is if your willing, he said: I know I am a stranger in town and all but your just a beautiful woman is all , and I have a few hours to kill before I head on up north, he told her, why not she thinks to herself he seemed friendly enough and all ,and she thought to herself that why not go out on the town with this tall handsome stranger in town, they left the bar together and he told her that they would take his car, which was a sport car and a very expensive car, she assumed him to be wealthy by his clothes and his car, they got into the nice car and pulled out from the bar parking lot leaving her car where she had parked in the bar parking lot. He remain friendly and she thinks to herself this is going real good, and just maybe I have found a man to date, and get to know, she has spent the last four years in college , not going out with any guys in this town as matter of fact she has never dated anyone steady, these thoughts left her mind when she noticed he has taken a different route leading out of town in the suburbs where there was some lonely roads not used by anyone hardly at all where are you taking me she asked” never mind he said” and his whole attitude changed from the friendly mannered man, she knew something was terribly wrong, and she has fell into the hands of a stranger that appeared to be and angle and handsome and all the things that a woman would want to see in a man, she realized that she was in trouble and she was trying to thinks what might be going to happen to her, she thought maybe I am going to be raped or even killed and left on the side of one of the desolate roads far out from the lights of the city, he found a road and turned off and it lead down a grassy little narrow road , she kept thinking what move she would make if this guy was a freak or even a serial killer, she knew she has been tricked and something was desperately wrong with this man and here she is in the car, going down a lonely road way out from town, take me back to town she begged him” he tell her to shut up and set quiet , what are you going to do she kept asking and he kept telling her she see in a little while and for her to be patient , that she would know in a little while when we get to the end of this road you'll know my plan for you, he said in a rough voice unlike the voice he had in the bar, she was thinking the awful thought of being raped at the end of the lonesome road, it seem the , she is now facing the obvious she was in trouble and knew it , he told her if she said another word he slap her face , and she hushed and knew better than to cross him again, the ride seem long and then a dead end appeared , noting but woods and a enough room to turn a car was all , he drug her out of the car and kept the light on the car and pushed knocked her down and raised up her dress and pressed himself again her and put his hand over her face and stopped her breath and violently raped her, and then he tied a rope around her neck and choked her, and when she completely stop breathing and moving , he pulled her lifeless body out of the path of the car and quickly got inside and turned and speed away into the night, she lay their in the dark alive and well , and not long later he backed the car up and picked her up , and she got back inside and the two drove back down the grassy road to the main road, that leads back into the city, this was the best night of pretending we ever had she said and he agreed , and said “your a strange lover, with a strange way of making love he told her, but what ever turns you I will keep doing what ever excites you , next week we will meet in a different bar and take a different desolate road to keep your excitement alive,,,,,,THE END.. 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