All My Thoughts of You (standard:poetry, 78 words)
Author: Lori	Added: May 15 2008	Views/Reads: 2675/0	Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Someone challenged me to write a poem with a hidden message inside. It wasn't as easy as it sounded :os. This is what I came up with. I'm rather proud of it and the fact he couldn't find the message ;o).

All My Thoughts of You 

~ 

To only notice you 

is to ignore your existence. 

I love you more than that. 

To only need you 

is to ignore I can stand on my own two feet. 

I'm stronger than that. 

To only neglect you 

would be like cutting off my right arm. 

I'm not stupid! 

To only nag you 

would make the canyon between us astronomical. 

I know the consequences of this. 

© April 29, 2008 by Lori 


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