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Forced Rememberence (standard:other, 977 words) | |||
Author: Strange Thoughts | Added: Jan 27 2001 | Views/Reads: 3701/8 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Peter's mind was sealed of his past, unreleased to him until a hypnotist sends him to the deepest darkest recesses of his mind and back on a frightful journey.(WARNING: some graphic violence contained.) | |||
Forced Rememberence By Jason Smith As the lights slowly began to dim around him, Peter felt his mind slipping away, diving into his mental recesses as the soothing words of the man went deep inside his hidden psyche. His eyes closed as everything around him went dark, and his mind blank as a single stretch of parchment. “And now, Peter, you are asleep,” the hypnotist spoke, just as Peter’s chin pressed to his chest, shoulders square in the chair he sat upon on the stage. A few soft chuckles rose in the crowd, one or two light applause in the smoky lounge room. The Mindwalker, or so the hypnotist had liked to be called, gently placed his fingers beneath Peter’s chin, lifting his head to face the crowd. “Peter, I want you to listen to me,” he said, his voice again calming, soothing and suggestive, “do you understand this, speak yes if you do, no if you do not.” With a sluggish tone, the deeply tranced Peter spoke, “Yes.” “Very good Peter. Now, why don’t you hold your right arm to your side, palm up, straight out for me,” the hypnotist spoke again with soft tone. Then, at simple mention of the words, Peter’s arm came to term with his request, palm up and to the side. The show continued on for another twenty or so minutes, Peter being the main attraction. His girlfriend Sara, on the other hand, was none too happy about what was happening to her man. So far “The Mindwalker” had made Peter dance like a ballerina, recite “Mary Had a Little Lamb”, and give away details about their relationship, which had her face still red as crimson. She made friendly applause and enough enthusiasm forced to seem a good sport, but inside she hated it all. Peter, however, stayed within those recesses of his mind through all of the time and length he was upon the stage. Through his eyes, it was not a mere twenty minutes, nor even thirty or a full hour, but rather, an inescapable cell of his inner soul and thoughts, things he buried so long ago in the past... A scream entered Peters mind as he now watched life through the eyes of a child. Though he wanted to turn away from the sound, hurting his ears, he could not, and he found himself with no control upon this new body and form. As he was pulled along for the ride, he noticed things from his past. The trailer walls littered with Post-Its and old monthly calendar slips; His juvenile senses detecting the odor of sweat and spilled alcohol upon the indoor/outdoor carpet. All of these things returned to him in a sudden wave, as though thrust into his past life. Still, he could not stop, driven by his past, unable to change it from the future, as he was forced to watch what he had chosen to forget. The man was perhaps 5’9” at best, with wide shoulders and large hands, with thick, greasy arms. The back Peter saw was covered by a white wife-beater tank top shirt, stained with slick marks of sweat and oil. A pair of tattered blue jeans were worn upon his stocky legs, and a thick mass of oily brown hair beneath a red and white baseball cap. The man held something in his hand, long and thin. It didn’t take Peter long to realize it was a belt. His form drew back, young and childish, fearful of the sight, but the man didn’t seem to notice Peter; he was focused on the form in front of him; she was in a bloodied housecoat, sobbing upon the floor, the source of the horrible cry that Peter had heard. Thick red welts crossed her cheeks, and upon her neck small cuts ran chaotically. Her mascara was smeared down her cheeks from salty tears, her black hair up in rollers of assorted colors and sizes. She looked like all hell, and from the way she cried, you’d think she was already there. Peter was starting to remember now... remember what he did and how he did it. As though it were second nature, he moved with the body, no longer pulled along for the ride, his body turning to the mini-kitchen’s counter, looking for anything he could use to help the woman; to help his mother. His young fist curled tightly around the end of something black, pulling it from a wooden block with a hiss of steel on fiber. He held the long butcher’s knife in his fist like a serial killer stalking his victim, the feel of it just right for his nubile hand as he moved forward with a scream, stabbing forward hard with the blade. The man screamed in truly mortal pain as his nine year old son drove the knife up and around, piercing through the flesh of his groin and protruding through the front of his jeans before it slid away and out... He screamed as bile rose in his throat, and fell to the ground, twitching in true pain, the greatest he had ever felt in his woman beating days. His hands dropped the belt and went to his groin as he dazed out, slowly slipping into unconsciousness as the bile simply stayed itself, choking him as he slipped into a coma, dying within ten minutes. His mother, horrified by the sight, drove herself into the corner of the trailer, rocking it upon the wheels as she did. The body would twitch time to time, as young Peter simply stood there, knife in hand, the front of him covered in blood. He smelled the stinking man; the putrid stench of the vomit stuck inside his throat; and he liked it. The knife dropped with a clatter to the floor, and a grin crossed to Peter’s face. Tweet
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