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Dead Loss (standard:horror, 3634 words) | |||
Author: Hulsey | Added: May 27 2002 | Views/Reads: 4490/2578 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Who are the ghostly characters Darren encounters and what are the reasons for their visits? | |||
The sky turned black and the street was awash with bouncing hailstones, which danced on the slate-grey pavement like jumping beans. The shabby cafe was an escape; not his usual choice of establishment, but it was dry. He removed his sodden raincoat and sat at an empty table. He ordered a cappuccino to while away the time and to await the cease in the downpour. Darren Armitage was fast approaching middle age. He normally ate lunch at the office, but not today. Today was different. Today, he wished to be on his own. His experiences of the last three nights had disturbed him. He had not related his visions to his wife, Joy, believing perhaps that they may be nightmares. He browsed through the menu, the paltry offerings not inviting to his delicate stomach. What he did not notice, was the leather-coated woman, who was running across the road to take shelter in the graffiti-covered bus stop. The downpour never relented, as the woman wrestled with her damaged umbrella against the cruel conditions. She cursed at the umbrella, as if it would obey her ranting. Her eyes turned to the cafe window. She had to take a second look to confirm her fears. Darren was sitting at a table, but who he was with bothered Melanie. A woman with long, wild, brown hair was sitting opposite her brother in law. She looked so out of place, with numerous flowers in her hair, and John Lennon type spectacles resting on her pert nose. There were several empty tables in the café, but there had to be a simple explanation, surely. Darren would not cheat on her baby sister; not after all these years. Probably a work colleague, she thought, her eyes now focusing on her mobile phone. Again, she looked towards the girl, intrigued to see that no dialogue was taking place. They just sat in silence, seemingly ignoring each other. Melanie tapped in the numbers and hoped that she was doing the right thing. The twins were playing on their Playstation 3 when Darren arrived home. He received his usual, “Hi, Dad,” off the boys, their eyes not leaving the television screen. He ambled into the kitchen and kissed Joy on the neck, as she was tossing the salad. She never responded, and Darren headed for the fridge to quench his thirst. “Something wrong, darling?” he asked, drinking the milk from the bottle. He received no answer. He approached his wife, placed his hands on her slender waist and looked into her hazel eyes. “Have I forgotten something?” “Who was the girl you were with at lunchtime today?” Darren paused and released his grip. “Girl, what girl?” “How many lunches do you have, Darren? The girl with flowers in her hair.” “Hey, now slow down, Joy, I had no lunch. I went to a dingy cafe to keep dry, and I certainly wasn't with any girl.” Joy lifted her hands to her face and shuddered. “You're lying, Darren. You were seen.” “I was seen? What the hell are you talking about? I had a cup of coffee alone.” “Since when did you start going out for your lunch?” “Only today. I had something on my mind and needed some time on my own.” Joy began to weep, her hands shaking as she turned back to the salad. “Darling, I'm telling you the truth, I swear.” She slammed down the salad bowl on the worktop. “Melanie saw you!” “Melanie? She's mistaken, honey.” Click here to read the rest of this story (429 more lines)
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