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The Kindness Of A Stranger Who Made Me Feel Guilty (standard:humor, 731 words) | |||
Author: Jughead | Added: Mar 24 2002 | Views/Reads: 3516/1 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Some of us may have been saved from death by total strangers | |||
Since young, I have loved adventure and liked to explore the unsolved mysteries of the world. When i was in junior college, I had chosen Outdoor Adventure Club as my extracurricular activity. Our first expedition--trekking in Belintang Forest, Malaysia, was supposed to be fun and challenging activity. However, a tragedy changed everything. I quit from the club after the trip and have then treated my dreams as castles in the air. Everything started when i decided to halt in the middle of the jungle, while our group continued to walk forward. What apity not to enjoy the beauty of nature while this visit was probably once in our lifetime. After observing the huge long-rooted trees, small curious mynahs and shy squirrels behind the bushes, I continued walking towards my group's direction. An hour's walk without anybody beyond my sight obviously gave me a good conclusion--I was lost in the jungle. Beads of sweat started to make their way down to my neck, but I did not care. I continued walking, with irregular shouting of my leader's name. My legs were already wearing out, but I was determined not to rest until I discovered my group. I checked my Swatch and was stunned that it had been three hours since my last contact with them. In the middle of deep thought on how to get out of the forest, I heard a girl's soft voice. "Are you lost? Me too. Let's walk out of the jungle together!" I turned around to see the owner of that sweet voice. She should be at around my age, had beautiful eyes and was an inch shorter than me. I nodded at her, without exactly saying a single word. We walked quietly in the stillness of the jungle, which gave me a suspense down in my spine. I was glad to gave found a new 'friend' as a companion. "What's that noise?" I finally began to make a conversation with the girl. She hushed me and cupped her ear with both hands towards the nearest tree. A growling animal noise was heard again. "Bad news. I guess it's a Malayan tiger. Run and when I ask you to climb up a tree, you better do so!" She whispered. We ran in full stamina, but the powerful creature managed to catch up with us. What a beautiful beast it was! its stripes were divine and every part of its body were propotional. Before I could get better study of the tiger, my companion had already ordered me to climb a huge tree with many buttress ahead. Despite my lack of experience in climbing, I managed to struggle four metres above the ground.My partner, who climbed up the tree after me, had made a good escape when the tiger almost reached for her leg. She climbed up until the buttress above my head and was sighing heavily. I was laughing hard of our victory, even though the battle was still going on. Never did I realise the consequence of laughing too hard up in the tree. The root that I was standing on began to vibrate slowly, followed by its cracking and before I realised of anything worse, I was falling down and down...However, an angel's hand shot out to grip my right hand. It was my partner's hand! After struggling for a few minutes, my feet managed to reach for a buttress. My hand had parted with hers and before I could say a thank you to her, it was her turn to fall into the sanme situation as mine. She had lost grip after saving me and only her right hand was in contact with the tree. I climbed up higher and tried to reach her other hand, but it had taken much of her energy. I tried making a bolder move, but it was impossible because i was standing on a slippery buttress. At last, when she finally could not take it anymore, she loosened up the grip and down she made a big thud to the ground. I was too stunned to do anything. The tiger, which seemed to understand what had happened, began to saunter away slowly. I cried softly in the darkness beside her corpse. I should have been the one laying on the ground, motionless with blood coming out of somewhere in my body. If only I could turn back time... Tweet
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