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Boy with a kite. (standard:poetry, 108 words) | |||
Author: Monoufo | Added: May 01 2001 | Views/Reads: 3395/0 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a nice, some my think a bit humourous, poem. i wrote. I appreciate all feedback about it. feel free to interpret it and tell me what you think | |||
There once was a boy, Who had a great kite. He thought it was a toy, But it needed too much might. He tried to control it, But it broke away. It headed towards a pit, Full of hay. He tried to get that kite, But to no avail. It was way too light To not be a sail. The kite is all gone now. The boy is all alone. He wipes the sweat off his brow. Boy, the heat has grown. Now there's nothing to be found. Not even a small faint sound. The only thing that night, Was a boy, who used to have a kite. Tweet
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