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Boy with a kite. (standard:poetry, 108 words)
Author: MonoufoAdded: May 01 2001Views/Reads: 3395/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This is a nice, some my think a bit humourous, poem. i wrote. I appreciate all feedback about it. feel free to interpret it and tell me what you think
 



There once was a boy, Who had a great kite. He thought it was a toy, But
it needed too much might. 

He tried to control it, But it broke away. It headed towards a pit, Full
of hay. 

He tried to get that kite, But to no avail. It was way too light To not
be a sail. 

The kite is all gone now. The boy is all alone. He wipes the sweat off
his brow. Boy, the heat has grown. 

Now there's nothing to be found. Not even a small faint sound. The only
thing that night, Was a boy, who used to have a kite. 


   


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