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Motion Sickness (standard:drama, 2594 words) | |||
Author: Giovanni | Added: Apr 13 2001 | Views/Reads: 4081/2398 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
In a small town a little girl who wants nothing more than to play as a child does is forced to master the piano. her father who is too busy slaving away his life at work, afraid of his wife doesn't pay enough attention to his virtuoso daughter, till it is | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story door, his English muffin crumbs sliding down his tie. Shutting the door behind him, the doorknob fell. Linda chuckled. "Mommy why does he leave so early now?" "You're daddy works very hard so you can have your piano lessons, which you have no other choice but to attend today. You also have the privilege to attend Wycliffe and-" "Buy your Prada shoes", Linda routinely replied. "Don't forget your pastels today. We have to go to Mrs. Gertrude's before the piano lesson." Linda hummed; she didn't like when her mother called someone Mr. or Mrs. and then added their first name, this drove her batty. It sounded silly or perhaps condescending, whatever Linda disliked about the way her mother said her piano teacher's name it all boiled down to Linda sitting down two hours a day to practice something that she loathed. "And be ready and on time when I pick you up." Linda's mother was seldom was on time and when she did arrive her mother raced out the parking lot usually hitting one of the bumps on the way out. Linda always felt motion sickness in her mother's car. Queasiness must have run in the family though as Leland's insides were constantly turning at work, so much so that he was branded with the nickname "the washing machine." Which had sort of a double meaning behind it, notorious for cleansing his hands, visiting the restroom at least eight times a day and out of those eight times, at least six and a half could be set aside for imaginary grime removal. Which for the germ conscious Leland was an unending battle. No matter how often he scrubbed his hands, he felt dirty and grimy. Germs were carried into the office by peoples' hands and remained in the office taking over the peoples' souls: eager young executives, cut throat veterans with vendettas and punch drunk stalwarts were all too infected by this money driven plague. Restroom breaks were a retreat for Leland, he took them as often as possible because it relieved him from the hot corner, which was every seat on the left side of the office, the same side as the branch manager, where Leland was stationed. The branch manager was blessed induced nervousness and sneezed open mouthed. Leland kept windex, hydrogen peroxide and brillo pads inside his desk. [father's neck twitched] Linda felt her neck cramping in her passenger seat, hating the seat strap, caging her movement, holding her hostage, subjecting her to a boring talk radio station, on her way to the dreaded piano class. She thought about smudging her pastel covered fingers on the window, her mother, who had not yet had her afternoon martini would have a conniption upon seeing an iota of damage inflicted onto her Beamer's. Outside the window the blind man, who they had driven past every day on her way to her piano lessons, was tapping his stick in front of him, apologizing as he accidentally poked a young man's ankle. "Could someone please guide me to the Blue busline?" he pleaded. He might as well have been invisible; droves of people went by. Linda's head spun watching the blind man spin around begging anyone at all for some assistance. Her mother flipped through the dials and stumbled upon a show that struck her fancy. "The point is that Europe is considering a shorter work day", Prof. Starks said to his colleague on the air. "How dreadful", Janette said to herself, convinced that there should be a mandatory twelve hour workday. The talk show host continued to query the professor, "I believe you recently published a book on how to die broke and if I'm not mistaken and please correct if I am -but the point of the book, your new release?" "That's correct." "The point of your new release by Spartacus Press?" "That's correct" "Has something to do with the current corporate model of America. It's a- it's eating away at the life- the lifeblood of it's workers." Janette, having heard enough at that point, found another station with some preacher advocating for removing male toy dolls from all stores that had the symbol of a purple triangle on their sweater pockets. Leland flipped on his radio at work, but made sure it was visible only to dogs and himself. He tuned into the station that his wife was previously listening to, in her car. He sat sharpening his pencil. "I guess what I'm wondering Prof. Starks whether my stock values in Coke and Disney will plummet because of your thesis. I mean is ah- is there some sort of correlation between the amount of hours and work that we as Americans put into the machine. Let me rephrase that, to put it bluntly are we being shortchanged? "That's correct." "So then the main reason why you wrote this book is to discourage people from taking unnecessary promotions. You know it's actually funny how I actually was encouraged to read your book. I'll make it brief so that we have time for one more caller. While I was visiting a Wells Fargo in Chicago I noticed a bunch of workers scrambling up an escalator that was running downwards. Both escalators were running the same way and they did not have a staircase, so instead of going up in smaller groups on the elevator, hordes of people scrambled up the escalator. Speed matters more than anything, anyway this guy standing next to me mentions your book, that this Prof. Starks describes the phenomenon the Modern urban Reflex." "Well Put." Lethargically Linda practiced her scales for a total of seventy-three and three quarter hours, over the next few weeks, according to her mother's Fendi timepiece, which included taking turns between her instructor's piano and home piano since she was only a few days away from her recital. Miles absently stared off into space on top of her piano, his left eye seemed as if it were closing. Under the watchful eye of her martini-enhanced mother Linda seldom rested her fidgety fingers from frolicking with the keyboard, even with her runny nose. She quickly wiped it with the outside of her sleeve, every so often, when her mother's back was turned. Every so often her thoughts drifted into playing with her stuffed toys and sometimes imagined miles sitting next to and playing along side her instead of watching from on top of the piano. Her mother's burning tongue sloppily pouring more Vodka into her glass had no idea that Linda's unbridled imagination enhanced the melodious sounds decorating the house's soundscape. The sound of pure genius produced by Linda's fingered, that ultimately emanated from her soul was more beautiful than any of adornments in the living room: the fine linens, the china, the crystal or the white marble table. She woke up the next morning with a terrible fever, above one hundred and three. Bed ridden for the day, she was filled with every possible liquid and feel better concoction, that her tiny stomach needed to appease itself every so often by tossing her cookies in the bathroom, sometimes she couldn't make it that far. The next day with a temperature still well over one hundred Linda was sent off to her dress rehearsal, but remained a trooper nonetheless, striking the keys as she had done every day that month. Her face was so red and her body was burning up so much that she felt she had been shoved into a Grimm's Tale oven. She swore that she smelled freshly baked brownies as she played. Suddenly all the faces around her seemed to be moving around like one giant merry go round; it was anything but merriment. She swayed a bit to keep in sync with all the movement that she perceived to be around her and fell out of her chair. That night, in a state of wooziness, she heard both of her parents arguing which was an uncommon occurrence, as the two seldom came in contact with each other. For some reason that night her father came out from behind the pile of articles stacked up in his room. It was not enough being worried to death every day at work, but now he had to come home to realize that his little pumpkin was ill and that she was undoubtedly going to perform in a stupid recital. He smashed his plate to the ground the way Linda had once seen her Greek teacher demonstrate to her class. Muffin the kitten hid underneath the Laura Ashley tablecloth as the ceramic plate smashed to bits on the floor. The next day Linda performed in her recital, the non dress rehearsal, the all important moment that her mother drilled into her head. A large crowd filled the school auditorium. The event was supposed to be the big night for its participants, when in reality it was a bragging rights session for the players' parents. Usually nannies brought and picked up the kids to school. Recital night was parents' night. The movers and the shakers did spend a good bit of time shaking hands for their own personal business matters and when the show had gotten underway, there was the staccato of pulsing pagers and singing cell phones. Linda wished her father was there, but knew that he had an obligation. "Run along Linda, think like Chopin. Play like a gem", her mother said pushing her daughter off the way a person might send off a carrier pigeon. "Take your pills before you go on." Linda ran off, sweating profusely and left behind the comments of a few people, remarking about her over active glands. She fainted again, this time during the performance and a look of despair grew along the contours of her mother's face. How could her daughter embarrass her the way she had in front of such a large crowd of spectators? She was a spectacle. Doctor Aston, her father's physician, who was greatly concerned about Leland's condition, sprung up and jumped up onto the stage. "Where is her mother? We need to get this girl to a hospital right now!" He paced by the side of the stage looking into the crowd for Linda's mother, then told his wife that he would take the little girl to the hospital himself. Linda's mother had just left the school shortly after her daughter's fainting spell, properly informing Jenny her fifteen year old neighbor by telephone the whereabouts of her daughter and that she needed to be picked up, as soon as conveniently possible. Doctor Aston reassured the woozy Linda that she would be fine, as soon as she was at the hospital. Aston feverishly drove, rushing through the red light, not noticing the sign saying ON WAY, or the green paint covering up the E, driving through he came face to face with an enormous set of floodlights, blinding him and then there was a loud honking sound. Tweet
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