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The Lady in the Attic (standard:drama, 1286 words) | |||
Author: GothicGirl | Added: Sep 18 2000 | Views/Reads: 5022/2472 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A story about a girl and her family secret, hidden in the attic in the grandmothers house. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story it. They also added many more candle holders, to light the room more. The flames of these candles created a demonic dance against the wall. As aunt Anne’s conditioned worsened,the attic became worse. Two days before my sixteenth birthday aunt Anne died. I was so elated when I heard the news, yet it made me feel ashamed. I was happy because now I could be with my friends after school and I was no longer embarrassed to have people over. I was ashamed because my wish came true, I wanted her dead and she died. I was also ashamed that I was happy while everyone else was in the attic mourning her death. At the time I never realized the hardship and burden her life was. Everyone soon stopped mentioning Anne, as if they had forgotten her. Nobody visited her grave or said a prayer for her. On the one year anniversary of her death not one person in the family lit a candle for her. It almost seemed like the attic forgot her too. It seemed to brighten up. The smell went away and the nails did not look so rusty. The echoes of moaning seemed to stop. The shadows no longer danced in a demonic ritual, but in a waltz. My last year living with my grandmother I moved into the attic. I moved up to the attic because I needed my own space and I did not want to share a room with my cousin Mary. After a few nights, the attic began to remember. Its memory began to recall its past. When I sat up late at night doing homework the shadows of the flames would dance their demonic dance. On windy nights the echoes moved through the attic. On cloudy days the nails looked rustier. Every night when I went to bed the yellow smell of vomit and jelly filled capsules drifted from the walls like it had from under the door from when I was a child. The attic, like an old man, could store memories of a lifetime, and release them when any one or any thing triggered them. Tweet
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