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"Bobby's Dream" (standard:Creative non-fiction, 1556 words) | |||
Author: jmsmacy | Added: Mar 21 2012 | Views/Reads: 3720/2714 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Bobby has a strange dream; in which he is a part of a huge battle. Upon arriving, he reminisces on his past, and sees where he went wrong. Once done reminiscing, he is attacked and killed by a man that is "of the light". He then wakes up, a | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story boy is much bigger than me now- He can easily step on me. He looks back, and recognizes what happened. He gives me a wicked grin. He reaches across, grabs my shirt. Everything fades into oblivion. Still the dark is there, worming into me... The light is my only hope, but it's so hard to reach out... I remember going to church with my grandma in eighth grade. My mom doesn't take me to church anymore- she quite long ago. Now she sits around and smokes. My dad has a job; but he's not much better in terms of personality. I sit down for church- I look down at my arms. The dark is recoiling from the place, seeking refuge deeper in me, within my dark heart. I have never done drugs, nor drunk anything I shouldn't have... I just think wrong, and act wrong with that boy, and so many others... I listen to the pastor's sermon, but don't get anything out of it... My thoughts are elsewhere... in dark places... The dark is killing me... The light is almost gone, even less of it now than before... Now I am sitting on the bus. My friend makes a dirty joke, my other friend makes a racist joke. I laugh at both. Now the memories fade into oblivion, into nothingness, as I know now that I am gone, that I have gone wrong- I even know where, why, and how I went wrong. I am back on the battlefield- I am kneeling. I feel drained. I still see the people fighting each other, some are dark, some are light... the people of the light seem to have an extra speed, or strength in their movements... or is the dark just exceptionally slow? Now I see a person running towards me... This person is filled with, is of, is covered in, the light. This light is even brighter than the one I remember from my birth... There is no more dark on this one. It has been torn off. He is filled with anger, but also with pity, and sorrow- he lifts his sword against me. I try to lift mine, but there is no strength in my limbs... I feel drained... His sword rushes towards me... I hear the dark screaming as I die... Bobby wakes up. His hands are shaking, they're shivering. What the heck was that? He wonders. It's Sunday. Time for church. He gets ready, and then they go. He listens to the pastors sermon, harder than he has before. He can't shake that last impression from his mind... of the light chopping him down... It's time for prayer. Anyone who wants to can get up and go pray at the altar. Surprising both himself and everyone around him, he gets up and goes to the altar. After a second or two, he gets himself to kneel, then start to pray. As he prays, he feels something within him moving, something that hasn't moved in a long time... He feels his whole self just being weird... He can't explain it. When he's done praying, he stares straight across at his arms. He felt his heart open up for the very first time since so long ago... He swears he saw dark vapor rise from his arms as his whole being started to be covered in the light, then he swore he felt it going into him. It was both the weirdest and the best feeling he has ever had. That night he has the same dream... Except this time there is no man running towards him, no-one whom he can't best in battle. He survives, he gets the better hand of the battle, until the very end- the battle is over. There is dark vapor quickly disappearing- besides that all he can see is the light coming over all the earth like a flash, or a giant cloud, from the east to the west- until all that is left is the left. He sees all these people that he has never seen before, but still somehow knows as brother and sister... it is a wonderful feeling; except we cannot explain it enough, we can't say it right, with this language. No earthly language can possibly explain it right, fully, correctly. Bobby wakes up from his dream... or was it a vision of what is to come? A vision of the end of all time, the triumph of good over evil, finally? Whatever it is, whatever it might have been, Bobby is glad that he got on the side of the light. And so am I. By: James Macy Tweet
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