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End of the line (standard:horror, 1738 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: Jun 01 2011 | Views/Reads: 3131/1971 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
As he pokes his nose into other people's business, will he end up regretting it? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story walked quickly forward towards him, not really sure what to do. However, he saw that the man was standing with his hands grasped onto the wall. He assumed there must be a small ledge or something to stand on. Now what? he thought. The man simply stood there. Was he waiting for a train to throw himself beneath? or was he waiting to find courage to leap onto the electrified tracks? His sense of moral duty or obligation kicked in, and he approached him. “Excuse me,” he said, “Whatever your problem is, you don't have to do that”. Scott looked at him. “Yes I do,” he said, “It's the only answer I've got left, so don't try and talk me out of it”. Michael approached the wall, only four feet away from the man. He was surprised to find himself this close. In books and films, the potential suicide victim always said that if they came any closer they'd jump, but this one simply looked at Michael with a dour expression of utter despair. Maybe this was all he had left. “I'm going to do it. I've made my mind up”. “Come on now, is it really that bad?” “Yes, it is, my girlfriend's ended our relationship to take up with Richard, a night club bouncer” Michael decided a more sympathetic approach might be in order, so he decided he would attempt to get closer in a kind of considerate gesture. He saw that a missing brick in the wall provided him with a leg up onto the wall so he could sit with his legs dangling. “I'm just waiting for a train so I can jump under it” said Scott. “That's not the way to go. Can't you just come onto the road and we can talk about it properly. I'll take you to a café and buy you whatever you want.” There was few seconds silence. “D'you think it'll be painful? I mean, it won't take that long to die. A few seconds maybe”. “Surely there are plenty more women out there, why wait for her?” “She's it. She's the only one who I know would go with me. Look at me. I'm hardly fucking prince charming. I just fell in love with her, but she's with bloody Richard. Richard the fucking dick. They split up you know, and I thought that that was it, that was my chance, but no, she's decided to try again with him, and now tells me it would never work between us. Well it would!” he shouted, “It fucking would!” Michael decided to clamber down onto the small ledge. He stood about three feet away from the man, and looked down the forty feet to the shining tracks. He heard the rumble of a train, and saw it in the distance. “Who are you anyway?” Scott asked, “Why are you so interested in me? Have you never lost anyone? Have you never suffered?” Those words were like bullets into Michael's brain, because they blew the lid from memories he had successfully managed to keep suppressed for 6 years. “Yes, Yes I have,” he said, as thoughts of his wife and daughter came flooding into his mind. They had been volunteering for a charity in Ghana when there was a limited outbreak of typhoid. They both died, leaving Michael with an only son with whom he had fallen out with years ago when he had emigrated to Australia. He didn't bother to let him know, and two weeks after that, his dog, a border terrier was crushed under the wheel of a hit and run driver, and that was it, he couldn't take anymore, had pressed a stanley knife to his throat with the express intention of slicing it across, but as it had touched his skin however, it had hurt, and drew a trickle of blood. He had thrown the blade to the side and then basically forced himself not so much to forget, but to accept that that was how things were. He had suppressed his emotions so much, like pressing down on a spring coil, that Scott had simply lifted the lid on the bottle holding his emotions down, and now they all came spilling out. Their faces and the dog swam around in his mind's eye, and he opened his eyes and saw that the train was thundering closer, and the man was holding out his hand. “Together, let's go together”. Tears streamed down Michael's face and he nodded, and gripped the man's hand. He saw the driver's shocked face in the window, then leapt down into the air. It took two seconds for him to hit the ground, bones cracking in his legs, and in the split second before he went beneath the wheels, when his head cracked into a girder, he saw above a terrified Scott still standing up on the bridge, with a white, ashen face, gripping onto the wall, not able to hear him saying, over and over again: ‘I can't do it, I can't do it, I can't do it...'. Michael was torn asunder the train, and the man clambered back over the wall as he heard the loud screeching of the train braking, and ran without stopping, the three miles it took for him to reach home, telling himself that being single might not be so bad after all. Tweet
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