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The Courtyard Tree (standard:other, 3553 words) | |||
Author: Shamoil Ahmad | Added: Jul 28 2010 | Views/Reads: 2995/1902 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The ugliest site on the earth is a man shivering out of fear. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story examination. Now he was at the threshold of an age when ants did not crawl for nothing and when fragrance opened up new vistas. Ants would now make a beeline to the branches and the youthful branches would swing tunefully, branches would dance merrily and he would climb up to the highest branch and hum a song or two. From the branch where he used to sit, his neighbor’s courtyard was visible. One day as he was sitting there, his eyes suddenly fell on a girl who spreading out clothes for drying up . He had not seen the girl earlier. Soon the girl moved out of his sight as she proceeded to the extreme corner of the courtyard. Only her apron was visible He then quickly moved up to the farthest branch from where the corner was visible. Her apron was fluttering. Suddenly the apron flew off her person baring her bosom. Her bosom was exposed and his eyes got stuck there. The girl’s eyes fell upon him...and for a while, she remained rooted to the ground. She picked up her apron and coiled behind a pillar...the pillar could not provide full cover to her. One of her legs and the hind part of her head was still visible. She smiled and looked at him from behind the pillar and the movement of the branch had become more pronounced. Now it had become a regular feature with him to occupy the vantage branch of the tree and the girl would also take her appointed place behind the pillar and on occasions would come over to the middle of the courtyard and allow her apron become airborne.... One day he dared to ogle to her. His heart began to beat. The girl scampered off to the spot behind the pillar with a subtle smile, and she smiled a number of times from behind the pillar. His heart had begun to beat more violently each time she smiled and ants had begun to crawl up the tree. It was a hot summer afternoon when the girl peeped into his courtyard from the rear gate. She had come to plead for some leaves for her goat. When she came close to the tree , he saw her from close quarters for the first time. There were beads of perspiration on her forehead. The upper lip was wet and eyes were playful. He began to pluck leaves. In the process, his hand touched her person on a number of occasions. She looked happy. He too was full of exuberance. Suddenly there was a rush of wind and her apron flew off. Her eyes turned crimson...beads of perspiration had rolled down on her upper lip and the sunlight beating down ....they were sparkling. His hand impulsively landed on her person and the apron flew off again and her pomegranates like breast exposed off and he could hardly understand when he was drawn into the girl... he felt the tinge of cold beads of her lips on his own lips. It was the feel of the first kiss....he sort of felt intoxicated. The girl was moved into his arms....her lips on his lips... and youthful wind blowing from across the leaves of the tree...the first intoxicating moment of life...the first beat of heart of its kind...the creeping of ants....and the fear of someone making a sudden appearance...! The impact of the first kiss was dissolving into his within like ice melting into water...and the branches were merrily dancing above and in this moment of ecstasy the tree was the witness for him. It was not the forbidden tree that had grown on the paradise...it was a tree of his own existence grown in his courtyard...it was his partner sharing his little innocent secrets....an accomplice in his tender crime. Suddenly the girl extricated herself from his embrace. Her face had gown crimson and her entire being was shivering. She ran off and did not even took the leaves he had plucked for her... and he remained rooted to the ground. For the first time that year the tree bore flowers. With the passage of time the tree grew bigger still and he too became a fully grown man and began to aid his father in his work. Both branches and leaves of the tree had grown in size, but the tree did not bear any fruit. It only produced flowers....yellowish flowers. And whenever wind blew the flowers spread out in the courtyard. The courtyard usually became littered with flowers and darkened leaves. Now mother had to put in more labor to keep the courtyard clean. In the evening father would spread out a folding cot under the tree and relax. He will always pull his pajama up to his ankle and squat there puffing leisurely at the biri. His mother would take her seat beside him and talk of sundry things while at the same time chop vegetables One day she broached the idea of his marriage Father took a long pull at the biri and reflected on those offers that had come for him. Ultimately the day came when mother had a canopy raised in the courtyard and the ladies of the locality played trumpet and sang songs the whole night and the leaves kept dancing to their tune. That particular year the tree was laden with copious flowers. His wife was beautiful. Gradually she took control of all household works. But she evinced no interest in the tree. She would frown whenever called upon to sweep the courtyard. Leaves also fell in great numbers. Mother would gather all leaves in a corner and torch it. His wife bore him four children. They also took no interest in the tree. They did not even play in its shed, nor did anyone ever climb up the tree. The eldest son was eager to chop off the tree. He found its presence detestable. To him the tree looked ugly. Its screwed up branches irritated him One particular branch had swung down to the ground. The ground around the root usually remained wet and whenever it rained that particular spot became muddy and slippery and the falling flowers would get stuck there. Dry leaves too began to collect there in large measure. His wife was fade up of cleaning and sweeping. The tree had grown immensely and provided the look of palisade. Now the entire responsibility had developed upon him. Father had become old and infirm and he mostly remained indoors. However, even now he took to squatting under the tree as he smoked his biri. He regularly coughed now. On occasions, excessive coughing brought him the problems of breathing. At times in the course of coughing, his eyes would budge out of their sockets and he would spit a large quantity of sputum under the folding cot. Even then he did not give up smoking biri His father at long last left for his heavenly abode. Mother wept to her heart’s content and he, a sad man, remained sitting under the tree. For the first time he had to countenance the thought of having lost something. His responsibilities grew manifold after father’s death. Now he was himself a father and his children had grown up and they had begun to assist him in his work. Economically he was more prosperous than before. His business had stabilized. He had the dilapidated house repaired and had the doors and windows replaced with rosewood. He also had a big verandah made. His wife had now occupied a new room and the kitchen was close to it. He desired that his mother had also shift to a new room, but she was not prepared to move. After father’s death she was a broken person and she remained inside her own room coughing all the day. The plaster of her room had peeled off and the wooden parts had become termite-infested. She did not even desire that this should be repaired. She did not want dislocation of anything which a repair would have necessitated. Whenever he pressed for her moving to some other room, she would say “why do you want me to leave my designated place...? I had arrived in this room on a palanquin and if I had to leave it, it must be on a bier...’ These words of his mother left him distraught and somewhat annoyed. Although he was well off but not so happy. The sky had acquired a dark hue and butterflies were no longer to be seen. Crows and kites had thronged the scene and overall atmosphere had become polluted. When his father was alive, the town used to remain full of life and activities up to ten at night. But now the area had become infested with terrorist and the shops and all activities got closed at dusk. Every other day the curfew would be clamped and cops would patrol the town. Treetop had become a refuge for the crows and they kept cawing the whole day. This cawing looked inauspicious to him. He intensely desired that his courtyard be freed of all cows and kites. He knew it was nearly impossible to get ride of them. He would watch them with his helpless eyes. It was now difficult even to sit in the shed of tree. Birds kept defecating, which had defaced the courtyard beyond recognition. Mother no longer had the ability to sweep the floor and his wife was just not inclined to do that. Occasionally he called in laborers for the cleanup Continual activities of the terrorists had thrown a scare into the mind of his wife. She desired to shift to some safe place. His children also wanted to shift out of this place and he would think plaintively; ‘where to go...leaving his ancestral home behind? What he should do about his mother...? It would be too much to expect her to leave her hearth when she was not even prepared to leave her room. But one day he was forced to think afresh about it all. He had a narrow escape that day...it was providential... He had gone for shopping with his wife when terrorists made sudden appearance in the bazaar and began indiscriminate shooting. There was stampede all around. His wife fainted out of sheer dread and he sort of lost his wit...right in front of his eyes heads were getting bored with gunshots...and by the time police arrived on the scene, many had succumbed. Terrorist soon vanished and the town placed under curfew. He anyhow managed to carry his wife home. Even upon gaining consciousness, she would start violently and cling on to him. He was himself adequately terrorized by the incident. He decided to leave the area. But mother was not ready to oblige him. Her only logic was ‘’does anyone leave the ancestral home...?’’ He also did not want to be deprived of his legacy. But he had seen it all with his own eyes; how human beings had their hearts lacerated with bullets and how blood oozed forth... and then nothing ever happens...only curfew is imposed on the town...and there are only vehicles making sorties... He decided to settle in a far-flung area...but how about the mother...? She would weep bitterly and looked at the peeling walls with her forlorn eyes. At long last his wife began to make a hysterical outburst. ..’’this hag will have all of us killed...’’ Mother stopped weeping She stopped speaking...She did not move out of his room She did not even eat anything. Sad and crestfallen, he sat down under the tree. The tree it seemed had held its breath. There was no movement in the leaves. Crows and kites occupying the branches were also silent. Only the occasional coughing sound emanated from the mother’s room and disturbed the silence. Sometimes the passing patrol vehicles broke the silence. A kite fluttered out of the tree and sat down on the roof top. The fluttering sound lasted for a fleeting second and thereafter it was all quite again. This gave a shiver down his spine. It appeared to him that the kite, the patrolling vehicles and the sick mother are all part of the same system where every individual with his emaciated face is trying to protect his legacy. Mother suddenly began to cough violently. He hurried inside the room. With her hand rested on the chest, she was coughing constantly. He sat beside her head and tried to extend his helping hand to his mother. His elbow accidently dashed against the wall. The weakened plaster fell off in a heap and the gaps between the bricks exposed. A lizard crawled out of his sight behind the lintel. He began to massage the back of his mother. When her coughing abated, he administered a draught of water from the pitcher and laid her softly down. For once, she looked at him with her benign eyes and then shut her eyes. For a while he kept sitting there. Then he rose and went to his room. His wife was lying there covering herself with a bed sheet. Upon hearing his footsteps, she removed the cover from his face and said. ‘’If you want to die with your mother you may do so...I am no longer prepared to stay here even for a while.’’ He remained silent. Wife covered herself and slept off. That night he could not sleep. He kept changing sides and for quite sometimes kept hearing the coughing sound emanating from his mother’s room. However, after midnight the sound stopped coming...the silence deepened further. In the morning he suddenly heard the weeping sound of his wife coming from his mother’s room. He ran into the room. Mother’s body was lying like a heap of cloth. Her lifeless body was ice-cold. He was dumbfounded. His wife was beating her chest. After mother’s death, he was left with no excuse. He sent his wife away to her parents for some days and he himself began to explore the possibilities of settling in a new town. He was sitting sad in the courtyard. The courtyard had become a heap of the dry leaves. It was silence all around. The wind was static. There was not even a crackling sound of leaves. Suddenly there was a wailing sound of a dog coming from the streets. The silence became all the more deadly. His heart sank. He looked about himself with his tired eyes. The tree continued to stand as though holding its breath. Kites and crows were also quite. It occurred to him that this silence was the part of a conspiracy hatched by the crows and kites and abetted by the tree. In the lengthening shadow of evening he gave a fresh look to the tree. It looked ugly. He will have it chopped off...he thought for a fleeting moment. Just then he heard the sound of leaves as a crow defecated on his head. He looked up in exasperation. He saw some vultures making sorties of his roof. Just then he heard the presence of terrorists at his doorsteps which was soon followed by the sound of gunshots. He sprang up from his seat and ran towards the rear door of the courtyard. But it seemed he was tightly held back by someone from behind. With a jerk he looked back and he found that his linen was entangled with a branch that had been down to the ground. He tried his best to extricate himself but the linen had been pierced through by the stem of a tiny branch and it was always difficult to immediately extricate his linen there from. Terrorists were trying to break open the front door and he was trying to extricate his linen from that branch. Dread and terror engulfed him. His throat dried up and heart was beating heavily. And the tree that was once his friend and the one who shared the moments of secrets with him had clasped him with its vice like grip. And the tree stood there in abject silence ...even the leaves were bereft of movement. And then the door gave in. The terrorists streamed in. Craws began cowing as they flew off and the courtyard became the repository of the ugliest site that the earth could present...the cawing of crows...the vultures turning in gyre and man’s entangled linen... Haplessly he looked towards the rear door of the courtyard, which even now he was trying to reach. Then wishfully he thought if only he had taken to running from the edge of the courtyard...but by then the terrorists had already taken him in their clasp... Tweet
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