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Gallery of Dreams (standard:drama, 1077 words) | |||
Author: MJ Dayton | Added: Sep 20 2009 | Views/Reads: 3465/2033 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Entry for 24 hour short story contest, fall 2009 | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story meeting any of her neighbors; the houses were not that close and she had yet to finish unpacking. “I saw you up on the hill under the Maple the other day. You seemed to be looking in my direction but when I waved, you just turned around and walked away. I decided that you must not be the neighborly type.” “Oh, I'm just near-sighted, that's all. I didn't see you.” “You were carrying a bundle, it sounded like you had a crying baby in there,” he ventured, wondering if it had been her child he had heard. “I remember that day. That was no baby; that was my beagle. He was howling over his injuries and I was carting him around to get him some fresh air.” “That was one odd-sounding dog.” “That's not the least of it!” she exclaimed. When they were just kids, he had known she had a crush on him but he had been too young to have interest in that sort of thing. Now her flaxen hair begged to be touched and something stirred in the pit of his stomach as she locked her eyes onto his. He wasn't sure if the feeling originated from the corn dogs and elephant ears or if it was something altogether different. Over the next few weeks, they saw each other frequently, picking up where they had left off as children. They talked of old times, old friends, hopes and heartaches. They talked about many things but not why he had been relieved to be disqualified from the pumpkin contest. It was something he just couldn't share. November's clutch was almost upon them. Ghosts, goblins and witches were out tonight in the heart of town, but down CR-37, where houses were too sparsely spaced, no children came looking for tricks or treats. The only sounds they heard were the sounds of the wind whipping through skeletal trees and stirring up dried leaves that rattled like graveyard bones. She laid her head on his shoulder and his warmth helped combat the chill that had settled over her as they sat on a blanket in his pumpkin patch, veiled by the blackness of All Hallow's Eve. “Tonight, this is why I was nervous about entering one of my pumpkins into the contest at the fair. I thought it might reflect badly on my sincerety to the pumpkin patch, and you know what that could mean. Hypocrisy isn't tolerated.” “You should have told me, I would have understood,” she countered. "There are three things I have learned never to discuss with people: religion, politics, and the Great Pumpkin." “Linus, you should have known you could open up to me.” “Yeah, you're right. You were the only one who ever believed. I sure have missed you Sally Brown.” They glanced skyward at a disturbance just in time to see the WW1 flying ace come crashing down. Good grief! Tweet
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