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The Masked Artiste (standard:horror, 1630 words) | |||
Author: Zill | Added: Apr 24 2009 | Views/Reads: 2916/1887 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a little story about a haunting in Mexico City | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story couldn't possibly be true because that means... The non-human sound heard from the attic petrified Mr Rodriguez and his family so they slowly and lightly tiptoed towards the storage under the stairs and hid there. After about a minute of hiding, a big clash was heard and they thought it was as if someone fell down through the fibreglass heating to the second floor. In actual fact they were close, it wasn't someone, it was something! Those thoughts scared the family into praying for help as they were quite a religious group. After the family started reading through the mum's pocket bible, the mother herself started crying and Mr Rodriguez shut the book because it was just making her concentrate more about what could it be; or more importantly what's going to happen to them and how. Dramatically some slushy, gooey steps sounds started to take place on the stairs coming down from the second floor to the first floor. So whatever it was, it was close. It was also getting closer and closer and closer until they were being very uncomfortably scared. James had to shift to the left because there was some sort of hot sizzling liquid pouring from the top of the old rotting cupboard. The next thing the family heard were creeks coming from the steps of the basement. What was it? The reverberation was coming closer and closer until... CREEK! The rusted hinge door of the compact cupboard opened in a corrupt fashion. But what was outside? Nothing could be seen. It was pitch black. They all huddled together excluding the Sparrow because they couldn't find him. Unsurprisingly Mr Rodriguez didn't care about him because he would almost certainly be dead so he decides to care about the living rather than the dead. Swiftly, Mr Rodriguez got a touch on his larger shoulder and when he looked up with anxiety he... A few years passed on and it was the year 2009 April the 18th, the mother of the sons and her two alive kids were in quite a doubt when they saw some sort of darkness forming outside of their double glazing windows right in front of their very own eyes. They hid in the basement with a radio to see if the war of the anonymous mercenaries would be over. When they hid in the cupboard they were hiding in the same cupboard as the last event, they were hoping that the things wouldn't have memorized the area they hid in and so they wouldn't take anymore of the family away! But when the things came down again then the phobia was in full swing. Desolately James disappeared in a blink. Once again, the mother was completely secure. Then again a few more years flew by until 2020 November 18th, The Will son was coming home to check if his mother was in tip top condition but because he was in such a rush he collided into a motorbike on the motorway. His body had been run over several times before the police found him twisted and tangled in his own body parts. When the police department rang up the old mother she was devastated. Then she was about to faint but she stayed confident as she has learned to do so in the last two decades. Then what she saw or even more accurate: what she didn't see next was an even more horrifying fact to add to her son's death. Darkness. She couldn't handle it any more so she gave herself up and walked eyes closed forward. Disappearing into the mist of darkness. Falling into the shadow of anxiety. FLASH! A huge bright light was shining from the west heading towards the old mother. It was a young tall guy with a mask on. Driving down with his 1992 Barley Hayvidson motorcycle at full speed. He started slowing down when he was approaching the old lady. But he wasn't going to stop. He picked her up with his big muscled left arm and physically threw her on to the back of his bike. The young fellow dropped by the local weapon store to buy a football sized black gas filled hedgehog grenade that he will be able to use on the things. He dropped the old lady off at the store and paid the store manager a wealthy fee to take care of her, and so he agreed. The young lad set off with his grenade and zoomed towards the darkness! He found it and went straight into it. One minute went by. He didn't come out. But then, out of the blue he re-appeared with no grenade in his hand. He quickly told everybody he could see, to take cover. There was a gigantic explosion that took place. The darkness was decreasing. The war had finished! He started to head back to the old mother. He walked up to her and she thanked him very much. Then the artiste of alienology took of his ski mask. It was Sparrow! Tweet
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