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the poisonous case (standard:mystery, 3178 words) | |||
Author: tammana | Added: Dec 31 2008 | Views/Reads: 4026/2483 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
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Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “Yeh, I know it is not a disease, people have right hand slightly bigger because they use them more than the left one. However, look at the handwriting in this letter. These lines are smeared...but one could still read it” he said and looked at Kumar who was wearing a blank ex-pression on his face – so he continued “I mean, most of the left – handers are taught to spin the writing paper slightly counter clockwise so the lower left corner is to the right of their midsection and to slide the paper from right to left as they go, to prevent their left hand from smearing and make it visible as in the suicide note. Understood. Moreover, that means Mrs. Sheela had not written this letter and hence it is not a suicidal case. I'm not very sure...I mean I can be wrong...maybe Mrs. Ranawat's handwriting was such...whatever the matter is...I have to get involved in it...Kumar, I smell a rat...” he said and waited to see Kumar's reaction. Expectedly, he found him bending down and searching something with great attention. “What are you looking for?” he asked trying to hide his smile. “Sir, although I can't smell any rat, but if you can then, maybe I am wrong. Therefore, I am searching that wicked rat and I will throw it out so that it will not trouble you...you carry on sir...don't worry.” He said and then indulged himself to his ‘rat searching' work. “O my god! I have to give you a lesson on English grammar. It's a proverb you fool!” Next day, they went to Mrs.Ranawat's residence. They met her father-in-law. “Sir, I don't like this man's appearance. Such a shrewd man”, Kumar whispered. “Shut up Kumar and don't ever dare to talk to him...I will manage understand...just stay behind. And remember – no teenage attitude”, D'souza whispered back. “Hello sir, can we talk to Sandeep.” He asked trying to be generous. “What? You want to talk to Sandeep. He is out of mind. You want to see him. Out of question!” the old man shouted angrily. Now Kumar came to the rescue. He straight away went to old man and said, “Listen old man! My sir is very strict... he will make you sleep forever with a bang. It is none of our business whether your son is inside or outside his mind. And don't try to fool us. My biology teacher told that mind or brain is a vital organ, if it stops working, that is, if you were out of your mind then you would die – understood – die! And by the way, you are not our students that we will ask something out of syllabus and you will answer us.” He said still bubbling with anger. D'souza pulled him back by his shirt's collar and whispered “Kumar Shut up! Forgot my warning. And it is ‘out of question' not ‘syllabus' understood and it means ‘impossible'.” Then he turned to the old man. “I want Mr. Ranawat.” He said looking sterner. This time he let them enter still grumbling. Mr. Sandeep Ranawat was sitting on the sofa. “Hello Mr. Ranawat. I am detective Roligue D'souza and this is my assistant Mr. Kumar Desai. I would like to exchange a few words with you and my assistant will have a look on your possessions...I hope you don't mind. ”he said and gestured Kumar to go inside. Sandeep said nothing but gestured them to proceed. He sat there for half an hour looking here and there. Then he started his interview. “So, how long were you married?” D'souza asked. “Twenty five years.” Sandeep replied shortly. Meanwhile Kumar returned back hitting his head as if trying to insert all that he saw, into his mind. “Any children?” “Yeh, one son.” “Really!” D'souza almost jumped on his seat. “Any problem with it?” he asked sharply “No...nothing. Anyways, was your wife left handed or right handed?” he asked, turning the pages of a notebook kept on the table unknowingly. “What?” this time Sandeep was astonished by such strange question. “Am I not clear...? I mean with which hand your wife wrote?” he asked looking professional. “ri...right hand” he said hesitantly. “Can you tell me something more about your wife honestly”. He asked “Well Sheela was a far-sighted person. She would always think about her future and waste her present. However, she was not so foolish to end her life just for such silly cause. She was sensible and happy. Maybe her worry for future overtook her life in present.” Sandeep sighed. “So, do you think she committed a suicide?” D'souza asked eyeing him with suspicion. “Yeh” replied Sandeep looking uneasy. “Well then we must leave” he said and stood up, then suddenly remembering something sat down. “Umm... if you don't mind... can you please write your statement for me... actually yesterday my assistant had to encounter a very big criminal and he got his hands injured...and I am not very good at spellings...moreover my handwriting is horrible...even I cannot read it.” He said appealingly. Kumar understood why D'souza had tied bandages on his hand before visiting the Ranawat's. “Very well.” Sandeep replied and started writing – with his left hand. D'souza exchanged a glance with Kumar and smiled. They then went back. “So, what do you think Kumar?” asked D'souza after returning to their office. “Sir, I don't know about Sandeep, but I don't like that old man a bit. He is having a murderous look.” Kumar replied, looking very serious. “Whatever the matter is, but right now evidences point to Sandeep.” Said D'souza. “And I never understood why you asked him about children?” asked Kumar. “Yeh, you see Mr. Sandeep Ranawat said that they had a son but there was no mention of him in the suicide note. How can this be possible?” “Maybe she had forgotten...” Kumar tried to reason out. “What nonsense. No women would ever forget to mention her son, no matter how forgetful...” “But sir...you said that the note was not written by Mrs.Ranawat...and besides, we had seen Mr. Sandeep writing with left hand.” “No Kumar, we were wrong. When I was interviewing Mr. Sandeep, I just unknowingly turned out the pages of a notebook...then I noticed that it was written by Mrs. Ranawat...some recepies...with the same handwriting as in the suicide note... she really had a horrible handwriting,” said D'souza. “Anyways, let's go through the forensic reports. Traces of arsenous oxide were found. Arsenic was also found in nails... ok Kumar, now lets check your observation skills. Can you tell me what was there in Mr. and Mrs. Ranawat's room?” He Continued. “Umm... few medicines, perfumes, cosmetics...fruits, biscuits...accessories... few soft toys and some other decors...and then of course wardrobe items.” Kumar said still thinking. “Very good! You remember them all. Now can you tell me exactly what medicines were present there?” “Yes sir. They were domperon10, calphol, dart, streptomycin, pantac40, zintec...and apart from all these... it seems she took betain hydrochloride.” Said Kumar. “Betain hydrochloride...that means hypochlorydria...her stomach did not produce HCl acid...without medicine she couldn't digest anything. Umm...could you tell me something more?” “Yes sir. One bottle contained fowler's solution.” “Great job Kumar! You are getting intelligent day by day.” Said D'souza, being cautious not to use any proverb. “Hey! See here...the report says she had traces of cyanide in her stomach...but fortunately it was not in her intestines i.e., she was not able to digest it. Poor dear, she was poisoned from all four sides,” said D'souza, suddenly realizing his mistake. “But sir...”Kumar began “I mean she was poisoned more than once” he replied trying to correct his mistake as soon as possible. Suddenly something struck to D'souza mind. “Can you tell me exactly what the decors were?” he asked. “Umm... they were antiques. It seems Mr. Ranawat had great sense of antiques. They were very costly and tremendously beautiful. They were artificial flowers playing cards, hat liners and many more of nineteenth century.” Said Kumar still unable to believe that he had collected so many information and was very happy that D'souza was finding his information very helpful. “But Kumar, how do you know that it was Mr. Ranawat who bought all those antiques?” “Because sir it was written on them – ‘to my dear wife from Sandeep.' Wasn't he a very good husband? I wish I could b like him some day.” Kumar was completely lost in his thoughts. However, D'souza who called out “time to be back from fantasies, Kumar” broke his chain of thoughts! “OK now we have to find more about that son of Ranawat.” Said D'souza planning for the interesting future of the case. Next day they were back to Ranawat's residence. “Listen Kumar. This time we have to search secretly...we will not be allowed to go through the rooms once again...you remember that old man...,” he said. Once again, old Ranawat opened the door. “Come in.” he said coldly on seeing Kumar ready for action and went inside still grumbling. Mr. Ranawat was sitting on the sofa deeply lost in some thought. D'souza gestured Kumar to enter Mr. Ranawat's room. “Hello Mr. Ranawat. How is your life going?” he asked trying to begin the conversation. “How would it go?” snorted Sandeep his face showing immense anger. “So what work do you do? I mean your profession.” D'souza asked trying to carry on the conversation as long as possible. “Business. I have to travel out of India several times for business purposes...in fact I could see my wife once in three months.” “How old is your son?” “18 years” “Tell me something about your business.” Well, I deal in medicines. It is our family business. My dad is a master in it. I have a widespread business. We are whole seller as well as retailer...” Sandeep said, for a moment the sadness of his face was overtook by proudness. Kumar entered the drawing room with a broad smile showing a thumb up. D'souza glared at him as if to say ‘no teenage attitude', which he at once understood. “OK then, I must leave” D'souza said standing up. “Hey, that boy was with you? I never saw him!” asked Ranawat astonished. “I...er... I was there throughout the conversation. You – you must not have noticed me. I was standing right behind you. I am not so short that you never saw me ...hey, wait a sec that means YOU IGNORED ME...HOW DARE YOU?...” snorted Kumar pretending to be angry. “I... I think... you were going somewhere,” said Sandeep, taken aback by Kumar's strange behaviour. D'souza and Kumar rushed out with D'souza laying a praising hand over Kumar's shoulder. “Sir this is the address of Ranawat's son's college. St.Stephens University, Delhi” said Kumar after reaching their office. “Grand! Let's hurry up.” Said D'souza. Soon they were walking through the corridor of St.Stephens hostel heading towards room no 201. “Mr. Yuvraj Ranawat?” D'souza asked. “Yeh” he replied, a little puzzled. “May we come in?” “Sure” “Do you know your mother is no more?” asked D'souza. “My mother was dead long back,” he said ex-pressionless. “What! We mean Mrs. Sheela Ranawat,” said D'souza, trying to explain. “She is not my mother,” snorted Yuvraj. Hold on... are you not the son of Mr. Sandeep Ranawat, a businessman who deals in medicines” asked D'souza, irritated. “Of course I am... but she is not my mother. She hates me and I hate her much more than she hates me. My mother was long dead. Sheela was my step mom...” “Hey – hey mind it. Don't you have any respect for your mom? How dare you take her name?” shouted Kumar. “She –is – not – my – mom,” Yuvraj shouted back angrily. “Calm down you both. Yuvraj were your mom dead before Mr. Ranawat married Mrs. Sheela.” Asked D'souza. “Nope. My mother was still alive...she was very good...I was only nine years old when that stupid sheela killed her. She was jealous of my mother.” Yuvraj said with asperity. “Why did your father married her then?” asked D'souza puzzled. “I don't know.” He said “Very well, we must leave now. You continue with your studies.” Said D'souza and they both returned to office. “You know Kumar, while interviewing Mr. Ranawat I saw a cake container on which it was written ‘to papa – from Yuvraj' anyways you must leave now. Give me sometime to think over it.” D'souza said. Next day, D'souza and Kumar went to Ranawat's residence. They found Yuvraj at home; Mr. Ranawat was still looking sad and the old man as usual busy with his grumbling. “Hello everyone. The case is almost solved. I have heard that you are Master in medicines Mr. Ranawat,” asked D'souza to old man. “Any doubt in it?” he grumbled “No, in fact I have a question. Can you tell me which chemicals are contained in fowler's solution?” he asked. “Yes why not. Its potassium arsenate.” “Thankyou. That was the only thing left. So, my friends the case is now fully solved.” “What! Tell me who has murdered my daughter-in-law. I will kill him.” Shouted the old man. “Very well then. Mr. Sandeep, you gifted your wife antiques...you had a great interest in it. Isn't it. That means you knew everything about it. Am I right?” “Almost” “ then you must be knowing that most of the nineteenth century antiques contain a lethal amount of arsenic – you found it a very easy to spread that poisonous substance around her.” “What nonsense!” “Shut up! And that was the arsenic found in lady's nails. BUT THE LADY DID NOT DIE BECAUSE OF IT. Poor lady, she was unlucky. Not only her husband poisoned her but her father-in-law also did the same. Am I right old man?” “What...” “Yes...you knew that prolonged treatment with fowler's solution might prove fatal and as it is a medicine, sheela would not suspect it. What an intusion Kumar. BUT THIS WAS NOT THE CAUSE OF LADY'S DEATH” The old man only grumbled. “And last but not the least, the third one... what... Yuvraj didn't you send cake containing cyanide. You named it to your father and sent it at the time when he was not at home? That's because you knew your mother would not suspect it if it was for your father and hence she consumed it. Am I right?” “She – is – not – my – mother. And yes, I killed her. And I am very happy at that.” “I am afraid you can't be happy. Because you had no idea that your mother was out of medication at that time...so, she was unable to digest your cake, which resulted in vomiting. Anyways it gave a chance to your grandpa to use his medicines...I mean the fowler's solution. And you all did it just because sheela didn't liked Yuvraj – your only heir. You know Kumar sheela was the luckiest one to escape all those poisons, do you know why...because she poisoned herself...and the reason was of course, as Sandeep suspected...her far sightedness. Anyways I arrest you three in charge of attempt murder.” Tweet
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