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Windfall (standard:Suspense, 3288 words) | |||
Author: Anthony R Mackie | Added: Dec 08 2008 | Views/Reads: 3929/2265 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A poker player receives a huge slice of luck just when he needs it most, and from an unexpected source. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story a little more aggressively in the next round in an effort to build up his chip stack and to avoid being tagged as a weak player who would then be targeted by the “chip bullies” and hounded out of the game. No matter, the first evening had gone to plan and after a couple of vodkas in the Casino bar, he took a steady stroll back to the hotel and slept soundly. It was 11am before Del Boy awoke the next morning (which was extremely late for him as he usually got by on 5/6 hours a night). “Must be the mental strain of the playing poker taking it out of me” he thought to himself as he started to run a hot bath. No point rushing now he thought, as he had already missed breakfast and may as well have a large lunch a little later; he might even give the hotel restaurant a try. A couple of hours later, as he made his way into the surprisingly quiet restaurant, a huge (and shall we say a well-rounded) guy whom he recognised from the tournament, waved him over and invited him to join him at his table. This was not really Del Boy's scene as he preferred to keep himself to himself but on this occasion he wasn't sharp enough to think up a plausible excuse and just found himself having to accept the offer and sit down. Just to make matters worse, the big guy was French (not Del´s favourite race of people) and introduced himself as François before beginning to make small talk in what was annoyingly bad English even for a Frenchman. “The day can only get better” thought Del Boy as he began to survey the menu. Having ordered sirloin steak, chips and peas (which arrived in record time probably due to the lack of punters), Del Boy began to tuck in hungrily whilst trying to make sense of what “Fats” (Del´s new nickname for his French friend) at the other side of the table was talking about. François didn't order any food (although by the amount of empty plates on the table it looked like he had already consumed about half of the dishes on the menu!) so he was just sat nursing a coffee and a huge glass of brandy. The tournament was touched upon in conversation and it sounded to Del as if “Fats” fancied his chances of picking up some money. Having said this, he did mention being wary of a couple of the Yanks who were involved; for his part, Del Boy just kept quiet on how he thought his own chances were. It was always better to keep them guessing... Eventually, François excused himself and left to “see some people” - but not before inviting Del to a drink that evening after the game. Del Boy decided immediately that he would do everything in his power to body swerve that particular invitation as he figured he had already spent more than enough time listening to François's “Frenglish” for one day. That evening, the poker was more intense as a few nerves began to show and Del Boy thanked his luck as he picked up some great hands which, but for on the odd occasion, he played perfectly. After around 3½ hours, it was over and Del had made it! He was mentally drained but he was into the final evening and now he began to fancy his chances a little bit. As Del sat at the table and tried to calm himself, down came a huge chubby hand which slapped him on the back and a voice said “come about and join le gang for the drink Môn ami” - no need to guess who – François! Del Boy wondered what he had done so wrong in a past life to deserve this. At the bar, it seemed as though most of the players through to the last 18 had gathered to celebrate, save for the obligatory few loners of which he would have preferred to be one at this present moment in time. Instead, he drank his vodka while listening to “Fats” trying to converse with some German guy who, although possessing good English seemed to think he was some kind of comedian, Del Boy personally found him about as funny as toothache. Fatigue hit him after his second drink so he intended to put his glass down and just sort of slope off but François was too quick for him and suggested that they wander back to the hotel together. Del Boy had to suffer the Frenchman right up to the point when he opened the door to his room because as luck would have it, François's room was on the same floor and only two doors away. Even so by the time Del closed his door, he had already developed a pounding headache and couldn't wait to fall into bed. The next morning at 10-30am, Del Boy popped his head into the hotel breakfast room and on spotting François, popped it quickly out again before deciding to have a wander around and find himself a nice little “greasy spoon café” where he could eat without interruption. After enjoying a full English at the somewhat cornily named “Eatwell Café”, Del thought he may as well do a bit of sightseeing for a few hours as his visits into the capital these days were limited; and if nothing else, it would keep him out of the Frenchman's way until later. Arriving back at the hotel mid-afternoon, Del was relieved to see no sign of “Fats” and made his way to his room for a “siesta” as it could be a long night later; at least he hoped it would be. Rested, showered and feeling refreshed, Del Boy headed down to the restaurant around 6.30pm. François was there but was holding court at a table with three other guys, so Del simply returned the Frenchman's wave and chose himself a table as far away as possible. Not being superstitious, he surprised himself by ordering exactly the same meal as the previous afternoon but supposed it couldn't do any harm - what the hell, maybe he just liked steak, chips and peas! Unfortunately for him though, just as Del Boy swallowed his last mouthful of food, “Fats” appeared - already sweating with excitement - and informed him that they may as well make their way to the casino together. Del just nodded in agreement; there was no point doing otherwise. A while later once they had arrived at the casino; you could feel the tension in the air. This was the big one and Del Boy couldn't wait to get started. He and “Fats” had been drawn to start on different tables so at least that was a result to Del, for now. Play began on time as usual and about an hour in, Del Boy's table was down to six players - the other table having lost two men, one of them being the German guy. Unfortunately, the other eliminated player wasn't “Fats” who was still there, now sweating profusely and drinking Jack Daniels like it was going out of fashion. Things had gone well for Del Boy up to this point and comparing his chip stack to others around him, he was a favourite to make the final table; he just needed to keep it tight and concentrate. Finally, after another nervous 45 minutes or so, the counter on the wall clicked down from 10 to 9 as another player bit the dust and Del had made the final table. He was delighted and looking forward to the half hour break, while the officials set up the last table including the £250k stack of cash in bundles of crisp £20 notes. As the nine men gathered at the final table and seating order was decided, Del Boy looked around and surveyed the opposition. Besides himself and François (who by now looked shattered), there were two Americans, a couple of shady-looking Chinese and three others who were probably British or maybe Scandinavian, he couldn't be sure. Chip stacks were carried forward from previously and as they were seated, Del Boy couldn't help but notice that his stack looked pretty healthy; all he needed now were the cards to play it with. As midnight came and went, they were down to six players; having lost one of the Chinese, one American and another guy who turned out to be Swedish. The very next hand took out two more when the remaining Yank went “all in” before the river card and was called by another Scandinavian and an English fellow. The Yank had been holding a straight flush which was enough to clean out the other two and also gave him a massive chip advantage over the three remaining players, Del Boy, François and the Chinese guy. Half an hour later came Del´s moment of truth as he was dealt a pair of kings and after a round of betting came; the first three table cards (the Flop) which were jack, seven and king. Del Boy raised the stakes (needing only another jack to be one of the final two cards). This next round is known as the Turn (followed by the final round of betting - the River) and so for him to obtain a jack, he would have a full house so he felt pretty confident about the 3 of kind he was already holding. “USA” folded (followed by “China”) but “Fats” called Del and so the Turn card was dealt: a five - no use to Del Boy but by the same token he figured, it was probably no use to François either. Del Boy “checked” which signified no bet and “Fats” did the same. “He's got nothing” Del thought to himself as the River card was turned, a jack! A full house for Del Boy and so, as quick as a flash, he bet “all in” but to his amazement, François called him and as the Frenchman turned over his cards, Del´s world collapsed; a pair of jacks had given “Fats” four of a kind, which is virtually unbeatable and so was certainly too good for his full house. Del Boy instinctively had wanted to kill the fat Frenchmen but deep down, he knew he had made the mistake of totally overlooking the chance of four of a kind being on the table. After playing so well all week, he had made a classic schoolboy error and so it had cost him £5k and the chance of winning a hell of a lot more. As he stood up and left the game he glared at “Fats” but the Frenchman (to his credit) was certainly not gloating. Del couldn't even watch the conclusion of the game and just headed off to the bar to drown his sorrows. A short time later the game was over; the American took first place with François finishing second and the Frenchman headed straight to where Del Boy was standing and insisted on buying him a drink. Del had imagined that should this happen, he would tell “Fats” to “go f*** himself”. However, a couple of vodkas and time to think had calmed him down and confirmed to him that he only had himself to blame, so he accepted the Frenchman's offer and congratulated him on his new found wealth. Del Boy wondered how he had managed to do so well, as it seemed to him that the Frenchman was extremely drunk. This was proved around half an hour later when “Fats” fell over and had to be bundled into a cab and despatched back to the hotel. “Some lucky cabbie is in for the tip of his life tonight” thought Del as he returned to his drink. It was well into the early hours before Del Boy finished up drinking and wandered the short distance back to the Shaftsbury. As he made his way along the landing towards his room, Del Boy noticed that the door to “Fats” room was slightly ajar. “Probably too rat-arsed to close it” thought Del as he tapped lightly on the door and called out the Frenchman's name. There was no reply even to his second knock, so Del Boy gingerly pushed open the heavy door and to his relief there was the fat man slumped on the bed surrounded by his winnings. The initial relief soon left him though as he realised something was not quite right and then it hit him! It was far too quiet; a drunken man snores and that's a fact of life but this one wasn't snoring - in fact, as Del Boy approached the bed, he discovered he wasn't even breathing. As reality dawned on Del Boy, he started to smile. There was no sign of any foul play whatsoever; “Fats” had simply overdone it and had suffered a heart attack he reckoned so was now laying in front of him, dead as a dodo amongst all that lovely money! Del moved swiftly as it dawned on him that no one would ever know he had been in this room, so he grabbed an empty carrier bag from the floor, stuffing it full of the wonderful bundles of cash. Once he had gathered up every single banknote, Del Boy decided he may as well just check “Fats´” pockets as well, seeing as nothing was of any use to him anymore. This little exercise turned up some more cash and a solid gold “Dunhill” cigarette lighter which Del Boy decided was a “nice little bonus” before finally slipping the nice chunky Rolex watch from the Frenchman's nice chunky wrist. Del Boy stopped short of pilfering François's diamond rings, mainly because they looked like they had been put on before he became so bloated, and the only way they were coming off now would be with fingers attached. As he was about to exit from the door, Del Boy turned to survey the scene; it was just an overweight Frenchman who had collapsed and died when his overstressed heart had given up on him, perfect. He gently clicked the door closed and genuinely hoped it would not be too late the following day before “Fats” was discovered. He meanwhile, would be long gone. Del Boy was shaking as he made the few steps to his own room, with excitement more than anything, as the events of the last half an hour or so were going to change his life for the better and it was all thanks to a Frenchman too; what a turn up for the books that was! He quietly unlocked the door to his room and stepped inside closing it behind him, before tipping out the contents of the grubby plastic supermarket bag onto the bed. Del Boy poured himself a drink from the mini bar, made himself comfortable and started to count. Tweet
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