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Judge Jolly (standard:mystery, 1120 words) | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Added: Jul 17 2008 | Views/Reads: 4388/2548 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The loss of a cell phone leads Todd Chambers on a journey to retrieve it, with unexpected consequences. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story ‘The young man for the phone, Mr. Jolly,' the butler said sternly. ‘It is on the coffee table Higgins,' Jolly croaked, without removing his face from the paper, ‘would you kindly hand it to him?' As Higgins stretched down and picked up the bright red phone Todd instantly recognised as his, he continued, ‘I was not the one who found your phone, it is the finder you need to thank.' Todd took the phone, feeling he was addressing the newspaper rather than the man behind it, ‘I'm very grateful, might I ask who and where is the finder?' ‘He has had to go out, if you would care to wait and thank him personally. Take a seat...' Todd was on the verge of refusing until he noticed Higgins' hulking shape blocking the doorway, and to further his consternation Jolly's words had sounded like a command. He settled uneasily in a leather chair as the old man continued to read his paper, tutting at an article, ‘So much theft in the world these days, one cannot leave anything lying around – you are so fortunate to be re-associated with your phone.' ‘Yes –‘ Todd said nervily; sitting there, listening to the monotonous ticking of the mantel clock while the butler eyed him from the doorway; he was beginning to wonder whether his phone had been genuinely retrieved or whether something more sinister was afoot. Twenty uncomfortable minutes must have passed before the bell rang and the butler left his sentry duty to answer the door. He heard heavy footsteps along the hall and then into the room stepped a large well built man with a scar on his right cheek. Turner – Brian Turner. One of the names in his directory – had he found the phone? Surely not, that would be coincidence in the extreme, but before he could dwell on that another familiar face, Matt Tyler appeared, then another, Scott Walters, until he found himself ringed by a score or more troubled youngsters he'd counselled over the years. Were they ganging up on him? Had he been lured here, to this quiet backwater by a sinister syndicate of offenders he'd only tried to help? And the old man Jolly, hidden behind the newspaper, was he some kind of underworld mastermind who'd engineered...' ‘Don't look so alarmed Mr. Chambers...' Jolly had suddenly flung down his newspaper to reveal his true identity and Todd instantly recognised David McWeaver, formerly Judge McWeaver. ‘You know what today marks, don't you?' he asked, his voice suddenly losing its ageing throatiness. ‘I don't understand...' ‘Ten years to the day you've been helping youngsters like these – one or two of the older ones approached me and so we put together a little plan to show our gratitude..' ‘But we needed help,' said scar-faced Brian Turner, ‘and there wasn't much time. The best bet lay in the contact numbers on your phone. Basically I resorted to an old habit of mine – I stole the phone from your pocket, luckily the train was so packed you didn't notice me do it – and then I accessed your directory and Judge McWeaver did the rest.' He waved his arm around the room as others flocked through the door, ‘so here we all are to say thanks for your guidance.' Todd was gobsmacked. ‘We know it was underhand,' McWeaver said, and looking wryly at Turner, ‘I did give Brian a little rebuke. Now Higgins will escort us to the dining room where cook has laid on a jolly good meal. Tweet
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