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The Love That Wouldn't Blow Away (standard:fairy tales, 1012 words) | |||
Author: Lori | Added: Jan 22 2008 | Views/Reads: 3766/2287 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The Big, Bad Wolf visits a woman a few times in her life. My first short story in a while, so PLEASE be gentle :oP. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Double-edged sword {Exhale} What was brought together {Exhale} wasn't made in one accord. {Blew love to the four winds.} Having been bitten three times by the bug of Love, the woman was twice shy. Scared to pursue love again, she locked her heart in a steel enclosure and threw away the key. She made a life with man number two and was proud of what she accomplished. This went on for six years. She was content with life. And wouldn't you know it? Love decided to shake things up a bit. A man walked into her life in tarnished armor and with a beautiful soul. He had been hurt as many times too. He had been looking for love in all the wrong places. Only to find out he was throwing away pieces of himself with each new woman he met. He didn't want a relationship, was the last thing he was looking for. But love blossomed unexpectedly. One greater than both of them realized. The wolf didn't like it. Mixed blessings {Exhale} Double-edged sword {Exhale} What was brought together {Exhale} mustn't be adored. They didn't know what to do, was up in arms for the most part. They tore at each other's heart and wanted to end the affair. The wolf was smart. He played on the man being a gentleman. Worked on him through home life, through work, anything to get the man to throw away love. The man fought hard, the woman fought harder. She couldn't lose this new man, couldn't afford to let go of Love's hand. She struggled and resisted then decided to be his friend instead. She would rather be that, and love him from a distance, than to cut out of his life completely. The wolf tried again. Mixed blessing {Exhale} Double-edged sword {Exhale} What was brought together {Exhale} will go ignored. The woman gave up. She would allow the man to make the decisions about love and life, didn't want to step on any toes. The man said he wanted to fix things at home, and couldn't because it wasn't good to end a relationship while thinking of starting another. The woman agreed and said it was fine. Scared as she was, she knew in her heart if it was meant to be they would find a way. She set the bird free to see if it would return, praying against fate she would win in the end. Not as a life changing experience, the relationship couldn't have strings attached. Just wanted whatever he was willing to give. She begrudgingly agreed to let his heart heal. Mixed blessing {Exhale} Double-edged sword {Exhale} What was brought together {Exhale} can't be restored. What happened to the man and woman? Well they've gotten behind their walls again. Pledging their love for the other, but too scared to act upon it. The woman worries about the future and the man can't let go of the past. The woman thinks of could've beens. The man remembers the good times. The woman longs for his touch. The man prays to never touch again. The woman loves freely and openly. The man loves against his will. They will never forget the other, or so the woman hopes. But as with any love, they know what is right and what is wrong. No matter where the lines are drawn, they have made promises to others, vows which can't be broken easily or without consequences. They were made with honor and are supposed to be cherished for life. Maybe one day it may be different. Only the good Lord above knows what will happen to them. Mixed blessings {Exhale} Double-edged sword {Exhale} What has brought together {Exhale} There's a change in the air. WAIT! {Inhale} I can't destroy this one. {Inhale} What has happened? {Inhale} Love has won. © January 18, 2008 by Lori Tweet
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