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Franard (standard:romance, 1200 words) | |||
Author: GXD | Added: Jul 20 2007 | Views/Reads: 3456/2333 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A young painter lives and re-lives his fantasy love for the little princess. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story scratching at his window. Skeptical, with mixed expectations he stepped quietly across the floor and peeked through the window. It was the poodle carrying a little basket. He threw up the sash and her dog leaped onto his bed. Paul sat and took the dog onto his lap, scratching behind its ears and rabbling its fur. The poodle whined and trembled. In the basket was a half-melon, ripe and redolent. Floating in place of its seedpod was a toy vessel with a note stuck into its smokestack. "You must learn to finish what you have left undone. Do not put off until tomorrow that which you might do today. Do not anticipate, but act promptly." It was signed by Jeanne-Marie and sealed with her palm print... that savory palm whose topography was indelibly etched in Franard's tongue-tip. He lifted the puppy's chin and looked deep into its eyes. The dog was transformed. With a bold leap it bounded out the open window and disappeared into the night. Paul felt his heart pounding. He snatched up his sketchpad and ran, quickly, silently after the dog. Ten minutes later, by tracking the barks, Paul found the puppy clutching a twisted bed sheet. It hung from the second story window of a modest castle. The face alit in the window above was none other. His heart leaped, and it made him shiver. Adroitly, Paul clambered up the silken ladder and into the palms of his love. He was unprepared for the thrill of exhilaration at the tangible reality of this moment. They touched, stood palm to palm, exchanged curiosities, accommodated. Each traded feelings, broadcast feelings with their eyes and felt a circulating current leaping the capacitors of their palms, after passing through the heart on the return circuit! To suddenly feel complete! And the capacitors of their palms resonated, augmenting the amplitude of their sensations! Tuning in to each other. Turning on to each other. Turning into each other. The next day, Paul attacked his canvas with a feather brush. Each feather had been dipped in paint of a different color. Twirling and swishing and weaving, he created a multicolor mood on the canvas. This would be the base-coat for the actual portrait. Even before it had dried, Paul swabbed the canvas with a lightly pigmented varnish that masked the design below -- but not altogether. Following nature's random expressions in the base coat, Franard replicated its spirit in the portrait of his princess lolling on her bed, holding a puppy above her. So, this was the poodle's fleecy coat...and he stroked the brush..... and this was the texture of her finger...and he stroked again... The canvas images emerged as if by Magick, and Paul was driven to create all of her as quickly as he could. He ached to embrace her and breathe life into her. The first draft literally flushed with the intensity of feeling that he conveyed to the canvas. But as the peak of his excitement subsided, little by little his brush became more realistic, creating the museum-piece that amuses us to this day. Seattle, 1995 Gerald X. Diamond Tweet
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