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Mummy's boy (standard:horror, 1917 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: Jul 05 2007 | Views/Reads: 3589/2213 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
What happens when a son loves his mother a little too much? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story venomous snakes. She decided that that programme was decent enough for him to watch. She would vet his programming, and not let him watch anything too violent, or too risqué. Again, he appreciated this. There were bad influences everywhere, and she did a good job of keeping him sane, keeping him pure. Most people had good and bad elements of varying degrees, and Paul liked to think he had no negativity within him. He was a good son, who made his mother proud, and by doing that, he made himself proud. Yet, in suppressing his bad elements to such a degree, it was like a spring, pressed down. His overwhelming goodness kept the coil at bay, but when negative influences crept in, it would spring up, until his positivity pressed it down again. It wasn't pressed now though. It had sprang up and caused him to get so angry, that the only reason he had stopped stabbing was through sheer exhaustion. He simply physically could do it no longer, but the desire to keep stabbing had subsided, and he realised what he had done. His purity had vanished in that act. Perhaps he was not simply ‘bad', but evil. It was an evil act, but he still liked to think of himself as a good person. The very fact that his mother day dead before him was testament to the fact that he could become bad, could be susceptible to outside influences, which in turn, could change his behaviour, could make him perform an evil act. He was right to shun other people's company, if this was what they could make him do, he thought. They had taken his mother, had caused his negativity to spring up and turn him into a rage filled individual, who had simply said to his mother: ‘Can I stay up another fifteen minutes to watch the end of this programme?' ‘No, you can't' she had said. ‘You know it's past your bedtime. Get up those stairs, and I want the light off by the time I get up there'. Paul had angrily stormed up the stairs, changed into his pyjamas, and was about to follow his mother's orders when she came in to reprimand him for angrily walking away. With a wagging finger, and a stern expression, she was going to give him a severe scolding, but Paul was still angry, and picked up her husband's fishing knife that she had kept for sentimental and aesthetic purposes on a sideboard, and sent it into her neck without hesitation. He looked at the other side of the bed. It was glistening crimson. I can't sleep there tonight, he thought. Maybe never again. No more tucking in. Sometimes he regretted the fact that she never read to him anymore before he went to sleep. She had stopped reading, not a children's book, but a fantasy novella aimed at teenagers. It had reached its conclusion three years ago, and she had never read to him since. Perhaps, he thought, he was a little old for that kind of thing. Mother knows best. He turned and walked out onto the landing, and descended the stairs, his blood soaked pyjamas cold against his skin. He slowly made his way into the living room, and sat in her favourite armchair. The television was still on. He saw that the credits were rolling for the end of the programme he had wanted to watch. He was tired, and his eyelids began to droop slightly. He was suddenly jolted awake by his mobile telephone ringing. It was in his coat in the hall. He slowly made his way towards it, rummaged through his pockets until he found it, and saw that the screen read: ‘Anonymous call'. He answered it. “Hello,” he said, “Who's that?”. “I know what you've done,” came a hoarse voice. “I know. Someone's been a very bad boy, and don't think that...” Suddenly there seemed to be a disturbance on the other end of the line, as though the person had been distracted. “I'll speak to you later,” the voice said “Keep your phone on”. The call was ended, and Paul heard nothing. That was it, he thought. I'm caught. Perhaps prison might not be such a bad place. With mother gone, I'm going to find it very difficult to look after myself. Yet, he wanted to stay to feel her presence. The house would surround him in a loving mother's embrace. Who knew? he thought, who was it? and how did they know? The police will find me anyway when the man tells them. I might as well hand myself in. Perhaps I'll get a lighter sentence that way, and if I do that, then the sooner I'll be back here. He walked out of the house, slowly making the one mile trek to a police station. People stared in fascination at him as he walked, but he ignored them, just like he would have done if it had been a normal day. The place was quiet. A policeman who appeared to be in his late fifties was sat reading a newspaper. Paul ambled in and fell to his knees. The man stared at him with trepidation. “I've killed my mother” Paul said, loudly. “I've killed her”. Suddenly, the mobile telephone in his hand rang. He'd forgotten he was carrying it. The policeman didn't move. Paul answered after a few moments hesitation. He was breathing heavily. “Yes,” he said, quietly. “I know,” the voice said again. “I know who you are, and what you've done, what you're doing. I know you're stealing from the bank you work at. Well, cut me in, and I won't say anything”. Paul dropped the telephone, and put his bloodied hands to his bloodied face. Tweet
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