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Author: Ashley KUpdated: Mar 31 2007Views/Reads: 3344/2185Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Two sisters hold the key to a war brewing in our solar system
 



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looked at the bed thinking I might be more comfortable on the damp 
concrete floor that had a mouse or two squeaking around looking for 
crumbs. Finally I grabbed the thin old cover and got under it feeling 
surprisingly warm, even though the thing was covered in holes from top 
to bottom. As I lay quietly in my rickety old bed, stricken with fear 
that it was going to collapse on me. Unfortunately just as began to 
drift of into sleep, fear began to make it's way through my mind. 
Nibbling on me, dissolving me into nothing. Until I was finally able to 
break away from the fear of “what happens tomorrow.” By reassuring 
myself that this was all just a dream, but soon after what seemed hours 
I was finally able to fall into a deep uncomfortable sleep. 

Chapter 4 It was only a few hours later when I was awoken by a loud
crash , that came from outside my door. I quickly jumped out of my 
sleep, numb with fear of what was outside my door. But I wouldn't have 
to wait much longer because what ever made that noise was coming into 
the room. I could here the jingling and rattling of the door knob as it 
was unlocked. Soon the door swung open as a tall rather large figure 
appeared at the door. Finally the figure stepped forward into the rooms 
owning its face as I finally got a look at it, and it was... 

Please wait for me to post the next book to find out what was at the
door, what happens to the person, and who the person is, its going to 
have an un expected twist that you won't want to miss, and please email 
me comments and suggestions for my book,  .


   



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