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Dublin...Whore of a City (standard:travel stories, 1004 words) | |||
Author: Cyrano | Added: Oct 23 2006 | Views/Reads: 3768/2308 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Forewarned is forearmed at sea, so when the radio warns of gales heading my way I make for the nearest harbour and look for somewhere to rest up. But Dublin is a sorrowful place at five in the morning. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “This'll be yer room, sir.” I enter and feel heartened by the simplicity of its furnishings. ‘On suite' means a hand basin below a cracked mirror in the corner of the room. The old girl grips my hand harder, leading me through another door into a hallway bathroom with a claw-foot bathtub. Somehow its charming, even quaint, and not what I'm used to, being spoiled and pampered by luxurious bathrooms with all the accompanying in-room entertainment. On two walls hang pictures of the Virgin Mary. On the lopsided cabinet at the side of the bed, a scented candle burns. No need to worry about smoke detectors going off in this accommodation. I turn back to her. “How much?” She smiles. “Oh it'll be nothin' dear lad, after all, yer got yer hair clipped by m'boy - that'll be payment enough fur sure now.” I almost laugh in embarrassment but instinctively know the old girl's sensitivity, her honesty and thoughtfulness. I explain I cannot be staying for free, that fifty pounds will have to be paid for my stay. “Then you'll not be a stayin' sir, I couldn't face m' lad if I were to be takin' yer money.” She pulls the covers down the bed and folds them neatly. The sheets are brilliantly white. “Yer a client of my son and we looks after our customers if we can. Now you'll be bringin' yer things through, won't yer, and I'll be makin' yer a cuppa hot tea.” The barber said nothing about the room being free, saying simply, "The old woman'll look after yer." Sea salt stinging my face, I turn on the tap. Water gurgles, knocks and rushes its way through the lead pipes a hundred years old. I pull off my clothes and sit chest deep in the huge enamel tub. What bliss, what eternal bliss to feel my body soaking after taking such a beating from the waves. My rib cage bruised and blackened by the tiller, my hands sore from rope burns. Bliss I tell you. Heaven is a claw-foot bathtub in an old lady's home in Dublin. Leave me now. Let me sleep. Tweet
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