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The First Date (standard:romance, 1730 words) | |||
Author: Steve Craine | Added: Aug 08 2006 | Views/Reads: 3802/2382 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A story of a internet date that goes very well...if you have ever talked on line and met someone... this is a story for you | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story the moment. So what are we doing as your pull yourself together ? He looks at you and smiles and says how about dinner and a surprise? Do you like surprises? Sure what woman doesn't? So you enter his car and off you go... So where are we eating at as you look at him with one of your sexiest smiles? it's a surprise! His car is heading toward a area your unfamiliar with a beautiful winding road The trees towering above the road as the sky darkens and the evening stars pop out one by one. As the car whisks you up this scenic mountain road your in wonderment of the evening, the ride, and of course this man who as totally enchanted you. The car rounds the last beautiful curve to a sensational Chateau. The enchantment of this French Castle is literally breath taking. Opening your door and taking your hand he leads you to the huge wood doors of this magnificent palace. As the doors open you feel as if you were a four year old entering the gates of Wonderland little miss Alice her self. The tall ceilings and the brilliant red drapery and evenly spaced lights that look like the torches of the past. Oh my God the feeling of romance is flowing like a water fall after a spring time rain. Your Seated at a superb table with the bright white napkins in teepee shapes and large stem wine glasses waiting to be fill with a lushes French wine. Our waiter enters lighting our candles and pouring that nectar A hour of true amazement has past, a dinner so divine. The company so enchanting and romantic yet stimulating to say the least. Out of no where there is music, would you please dance with me my sweet? As you dance on a marble highly polished floor he holds you so close your sure he can feel your heart beat. Your fluttering across the floor like Cinderella, When you see through the large windows the moon rising in the distance. Looking at him so innocent you say can we get some fresh air? Dancing you to the large French doors and he opens them to a white marble patio that had to of been in a movie. Walking to the railing of this exquisite retreat your thinking my turn. He has dazzled you all evening now its your time. Catching him staring at you with a look of seduction, you move in. Placing your hands on his chest lifting your head to place a carefully planned thank you kiss, and with a slight batting of your eyes you say Your wonderful. You feel his knees buckle slightly. Oh yes you feel the romance yourself as the memorized moment is so delicious! Then he softly places his right hand under your chin drawing you into a kiss that melts you! So tender as your lips touch, you feel and taste his tongue moving and trilling emotions that have been dormant way to long. Bodies pulled close and arms around each other in such a tantalizing embrace. Catching your self as your hand slides down his back toward those tight jeans. Looking deep into your eyes with a smile that you have dreamed about though out your years on this earth, He says to you ..... Will you see me tomorrow? What have you in mind, with you head cocked slightly to the side and with your sweetest smile. Well would love to take you on a train ride. it's a scenic romantic ride for those who love the view of nature and the true beauty of a sweet after noon of company that's so attracted to you! would love to, with his arms around your waist and your hands softly rubbing his chest. it's a date you say! The drive home is exquisite as the evening before, the stars are sparkling with a glow that dreams are made of. Pulling up to you home and shuts off the car he opens his door and moves quickly to your door, Wow! So sweet to be treated like the lady you are. Holding your hand he walks you to the front entrance of your home, stopping under your dimly lit porch light. He turns to you and says I want to thank you for a beautiful night with such a enchanting woman. I am the one who should be thanking you, Its been a long time since I have had a evening so tantalizing as you have shown me. Yes he moves his warm wet lips towards yours and you can feel them before they touch. Hummmm the feelings are so sweet! it's a kiss good night, yet you know there will be more not tonight but more that will cause flares that will only be matched by a solar explosion from the Sun its self. Good night my sweet. Lets say 1pm tomorrow is that good for you? Oh yes I will be waiting. Good night. Tweet
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